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Kevinltk


Hello, I am a graphic designer who enjoys MLP. Drawing, writing, and proofreading are the main things I like to share with others.

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The standalone sequel to my first ever story, An Apple Amidst Crazies. Reading the prequel is not required at all.


Featured briefly on 2/8/15


With Big Mac and her friends unable to help her with this season's applebucking, Applejack thought she was going to be the only one to take on the enormous task. That is, until she meets Derpy.

With Derpy helping out, Applejack should have no worries with this season's applebucking.

Probably.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

The ending though :rainbowlaugh:

10/10 Would read again
- IGN

Seriously. This was effing brilliant and delightfully unique.
~Twi

Hah. That's amazing. Also, this is featured.

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So it is, if you turn off mature stories lol.

Thanks for telling me.

what a nice story

I just don't know what went....right.

OK, this was also hillarious! Thank you, I really laughed a lot today... :D

Typos
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silently apologizing the innocent furniture
apologizing to the
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uncomfortable silence,similar to one
silence, similar

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Fixed, thank you for pointing those out.

It feels like only half of a story, but the joke worked. A green thumb for you!

i still prefer more chapter storys, but for a one-shot it really worked for me, i like it.

Aw yeah, best poni being adorable! What's not to like?

Good job on this story. Very nice and cute.

This is a lot better than I was expecting. :eeyup:

This was a great little story and was well worth the read. Keep it up, my friend!

:rainbowlaugh: I guess Derpy worked her butt off!

Great story! Have a fave for the laughs. :ajsmug:

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Thanks, Babs, glad you enjoyed it.

...and thus Derpy became the newest honorary member of the Apple Family.

Apple Butter........Now I get it!

The butt is bubbly and it is a hard-working farm implement. When Big Mac stepped out, I expected him to whip out a diamond and propose to Derpy on the spot.

Derpy's butt is a trained professional, as is the rest of her. Do not try this at home.

The Derpy's butt....... Anyone reading this get the reference?

Anyway, I could definitely see such a funny little tidbit happening in canon sometime, perhaps between episodes, but I love it either way! FAVED! :ajsmug:

Now we know why her eyes work independently. Derpy uses them to extrapolate her trajectory for targeting.
She later became a crime-fighting super-hero named "Backup." Police tend to call for her fairly often. You should have seen what she did to Tirek that one time. :derpytongue2:

You've got puns of steel.

This story knows it is being silly and that's what I love about it.

Bow down to the big bubble butt!

I. Want. More. NOW. SHES SO FUNNY I WAS DYING!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Applejack rolled her eyes. “Ah would kick your butt for bein’ so dumb, but that tree already beat me to it.” With a sigh, she walked off. “Ah’ll get you in a minute. Just sit tight… Or should Ah say, just lie there, since… you know.”

Smart ass. 😂

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