For a long time, Twilight and Rainbow Dash have been marefriends, and as time passed on, their love for each other kept on growing.
With her recent ascension to an alicorn, Twilight recalls the longtime pegasi tradition of feather gifting and wishes to bestow one of her own to her special somepony. After much preparation, she sets off on her next date with Rainbow, hoping that her lover will accept her gift.
A simple fic written as a belated birthday present for that jerk my friend, Twilight the Pony.
Audio Reading by GutiuSerenade
Featured on 5/6/15.
Chapters (1)
I have but one word:
Cute.
plural, singular
So which is it? Because it could be either way. There could have been other pegasi close enough to see and over hear and now they are all silent and stary increasing the stress of the situation... though I'm 90% sure it was supposed to be pegasus.
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Yeah, it should be 'pegasus'. Thanks for pointing that out.
This is absolutely wonderful, Kev.
Thankee very many~
~Twi
Ermaghad.... Can't breathe... To much CUTE XP
KAWAII! I was worried half way through when Rainbow scared her, I thought that might have broken the feather...
So, Twilight allocates time in her schedule for a certain amount of panicking and then calms herself down with the Cadance technique. That's wierd, but very her. Regardless of the story (which is good too) that's a fun idea.
daww
Short, but well done. A remake of the classic pegasus-feather theme, which is an element in so many TwiDash-fics. This time it's centered on the feather from Twi.
The story is cliched, but cute nevertheless.
Short and adorable. Well done.
Aww this story was so sweet and cute
Eh, I didn't need that heart anyways.
Very cute!
D'awwww
I think my d'aww meter just exploded, no wait it's, nope now it's gone.
Cute but cliche...
Well that was...................KAWIIIIIIIIII
Its so adorable that I'm gonna ahhhhhh..... *Dies of adorable overload*
-Sanity is overrated
I found this very heart warming and adorable. Well done.
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
...
*Looks at page blankly for a seconds*
*Rainbows begin to stream out of sleeves, butt, mouth, and eyes*
D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
--SYA, The Horse
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Cuteness overload, can take it! *dies*, lol!
Looks like you just added a few more miles to my odawwmeter.
Then they fucked. XD
5958633 Boo! That was terrible! You stink!
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It needs more pugs!
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There... now your comment is 100% PUGGIFUL. De nada, muchas gracias.
*incomprehensible fangirl noises*
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True, it isn't the most substantial or filling of meals, but it's tasty, and that counts for something, right?
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Yup! :D
More D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw's are needed
Omg omg omg
Sooooo cuteeee
Too cute how dare???
Seriously though, great story, Kev. Have all my d'awwws (and a fav).
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I DARED!
I sorta expected a paint-by-numbers kind of story when I started reading, and that's exactly what this was. The catch here is that you did a really great job with treading waters that had already been used many times.
I loved the idea of the primary feather. Its obvious that it's symbolic of their love for one another, and a nice little touch instead of doing wedding rings or something. And the part in the beginning with Twilight actually keeping allotted time for panicking made chuckle, so you get a point there.
Overall this was a short and sweet little thing. Nice work.
DJRD
Everyone? Everyone?! Which mad man approved this as Everyone?! This is Teen, I tell you! Teen! They're lesbians for heavens sake! When has non-clop shipping been classed as Everyone! What is this world coming to?!
Still, enjoyable story, old boy.
Wow, you characterised these two REALLY well! Very cute story as well
So good, I need your secert
I expected a cliche waste of words, and was presently surprised with how well this was actually written! You earn the Crabbington Seal of Approve, a useless seal that means nothing!
Awesome and cute. Love it.
Very well written, very adorable, you have definite talent.
The only problem I have with it (and with several one-shots) is that the summary covers pretty much everything important. Obviously, that didn't stop me from reading it anyway, and it's usually unavoidable with one-shots, so this is, at most, a nit-pick.
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If you have pre-teenage kids on the internet, and you haven't taught them about the things they will obviously find on the internet, either you need to restrict your kid's access or educate your kid.
(yeh, I know you're probably not serious)
5960868 Bill O'Reilly? Is that you?
quite the lovely story.
so good omc
And all the d'aaaawwwwws were given that day!
This was so beautiful.
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I haz adorable diabeetus nowz
I haz adorable diabeetus nowz
Heya! So call it belated, but I narrated and produced a fully-casted dramatic reading of this story for the month of Valentine's Day/Hearts and Hooves (or as the narrators dub it, the Month of Lurve) complete with music, SFX, the works. ^_^ While it is indeed March now, better late than never, right? Besides, who doesn't love a little TwiDash?~ ;P
At any rate, lovely story. Hope you enjoy the production! :D
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That was really well done. You didn't just read it all by yourself, but you got multiple people to do the various characters and added sounds. Thank you for making such a great reading of my fic.
One little issue though is that it looks like you have the wrong story linked in your description.