Derpy Hooves, muffin lover and mailmare, always believed she was just an ordinary mare...until one day, when she discovers: her butt is MAGIC. Now, using her powers, will she be able to save Ponyville? Or will it be doomed to live under the tyranny of trees, overpriced restaurants, and store-brand peanut butter?
Best ending. xD
I was laughing so hard I was crying...that was fantastic!
My initial reaction: This is gonna be great!
By the end: THAT WAS FANTASTIC!
I really like this story, but I can't see that it has much to do with the contest. It gets a thumbs-up, but I'm afraid I'll be voting against it on principle.
But this is definitely a great story. Whoever wrote this should feel proud.
This made me smile.
I thought it was completely random, til I remembered Derpy crashing through the floor with her butt in the episode. I love it when people explain random minuscule details of the show.
As far of the prompt, it's better to follow the spirit of the law rather than the letter in writing competitions like these. But yes, technically there was a fire in the forest and the make 6 were on vacation
This was great. :D Just the kind of thing I look for in these entries!
I hope that you'll consider working on this some and fixing it up for EQD. "Derpy's Butt", as I've taken to calling this, is one of my most favorite works from the writeoff. :D
This was great, with at the end there making my day.
Oh , how awesome you are.
However's it's what the Mayor Mare said that earns you /
"According to Twilight Sparkle's dragon assistant, they're on vacation."
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
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WHY
WHY ISN'T THIS FEATURED?!
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Oh, this was the last fic I read during the voting period! Delightfully juvenile, and just barely skidding along the borders of being too crude for my tastes. Reminds me a bit of the early Cartoon Network days, when they first started putting out original stuff.
It was especially good because I read it on the heels of two stories in which the fire in the Everfree kills everyone (Curse you, writing prompt!). Breath of fresh air, and exactly what I needed. So, thanks for that.
I about died during both the peanut butter and "Hell Hooves" scenes.
I didn't finish until about a minute past the deadline, though, so I couldn't vote.
That was great! I several time. Celestia's response to Derpy was great!
More please!
THIS IS.... SO AWESOME
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"My leg!" Spongebob?
Derpy's butt is amazing. Poor Sparkler though.
Y'know, this hasn't aged well, but it's still funny as heck. :V
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Coincidentally enough, I was re-reading this last night, and I thought the same thing. The amateur-ness sticks out like a sore thumb (not to imply that I've surpassed amateur level).
I'm glad you think that it's funny, though!