It is the destruction of Earth. A group of men manage to put together a spaceship to save them from imminent destruction. They travel light years to find a new planet to live on, and when they do, they find something they don't expect to. They end up on Equestria and must find a way to live in peace alongside their new colorful equine neighbors.
It starts out mostly focused on the humans, but I promise it gets to more ponies at the end. Another thing, I update the google docs version first so use that if you want to read more. It is unedited though.
Chapters (5)
600 words?
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There's more in Goggle Doc.
This version is outdated, lol.
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I have more chapters uploaded, but I need to finish editing first. The google docs version is unedited!
WHY U SUBMIT THIS BEFORE IT DONE
that was preatty intresting so you gonna start downloading the whole thin g to fimfiction
the story isn't bad i feel the pace is a bit fast though. Is this your first fic?
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No, It's actually the third.
You can reword "faster than the speed of light" to "faster-than-light". Also, it's light-year, not light year.
Google Docs version looks now like cliffhanger.
I want more
According to Google Docs, it took them about 3 years to reach Equestria.
With faster-than-light, it could be Proxima Centauri star, which is 4,22 light-years away, and it's the closest neighbour of Sun.
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It IS a cliffhanger in Google Docs because it's not finished yet. It was 3 years to get there and if you really want numbers, they are going about 8x the speed of light, and it's not necessarily Alpha Centauri, because this is a made-up story and doesn't need to be 100% accurate.
Also that seems to convenient for it to be next-door.
TL;DR: it's not done and it doesn't need to be 100% real it's just a fictional story.
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24 light-years away.
Btw years, how far the faction is? 2400?
And how the hell Equestria is in the same universe as humans...
lolwut.
Interuniversal travel?
Multiverse.
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That's a good idea, I'll implement it.
It is definitely in the future.
The year could be 2400 if you want.
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The multiverse got from one fanfiction I read.
(spoilers warning
)
Dash was testing stuff called HEV Suit, and accidentally due to breaking light barrier, she got psychically (but not physically) into alternate universes, including Cupcakes universe. (CRAZEY
).
And I am just asking about year.
PS.Some of these emoticons are just awesome (Pinkie's, duckface, facehoof, Trollestia, moustache, Raritycry, Applejackamused)
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I want to read it. What is it? And sorry for the lack of updates, I've been really busy with school and another fic I'm working on. There isn't enough time in my day.
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Here you go.
Warning, it can spoil some fanfictions (including Cupcakes).
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PS.By psychically I mean that it wasn't the body traveling, but other part of Rainbow Dash.
Sorry guys for the lack of updates, I've been really busy with school and other projects. I actually finished the editing on a trip to Disneyland while I had nothing else to do. I also drew some concept art for Tucker and Stacy if any of you are interested. I have some pictures of them taken on my tumblr blog, but it's with a crappy camera. I'll scan them when I get back home.
4 chapters for 6 pages of Google Doc?
Still waiting for post-cliffhanger (Google Docs
)
cliffhangers much and it ended kinda weird with the "twilight had a realization" that doesn't seem like a really good ending to a chapter
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I wanted it to end with the reader realizing what was going on with Twilight and her dreams, since I was using foreshadowing to throw what was happening in your face. I couldn't think of a non cliche way of ending it though, like "And then it hit Twilight." What about "Sudden realization overcame Twilight as the figure became more visible."?
I love the cliffhangers.
I think instead of Twilight had a realization, you could end with "Her eyes widened in surprise at the creature who stood before her for a second time." Something along those lines would be good. Btw, I think I see a plot hole here. You mentioned that they were a week away from the nearest planet. when the engine went out, they traveled FASTER than before? or was it magic? and what about their immediate crash landing in the everfree where there was no other indication in the ship until after they had actually crashed? I mean the explosion rocking the ship made sense, but i saw no indication of the crash landing anywhere. I'm not trying to be mean but I'm just pointing out some of the missing elements here. Take it slow. You could easily branch this out into a 3 to 4k word chapter if you take your time in development of the scene mechanics story in general.
(God that sounded better in my head. I also like cliffhangers too.)
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Ok, that was what I was trying to say actually. That will go in shortly. And that's not a plothole. I'm actually GLAD you pointed that out because I wanted to explain it more. Well, I'll explain it in Chapter 5, but MissingPony gave me the idea, so go read some of his comments and maybe you can figure it out.
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Happy to help. If you need any kind of help with wording or where to go with the story, hit me up. I'm writing a story as well and its proving to be a doozy in terms of length. Need something to keep me out of my own rut, if you know what I'm saying.
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Thanks, I really appreciate it. I was actually in a rut writing this chapter, so I put it off for a few weeks. You might be able to tell from the distance in updates.
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Yay!
Also, it could be further than 3 light years WITHOUT speed of light. I heard that the closer object is to the speed of light, the slower time is from its perspective. And at speed of light, time stops. Faster-than-light... time goes backwards?
Perhaps that's time dilation.
Also, I found three ways for crossing distance in time shorter than it would take for light. They are more science fiction-like than real as of now, though.
1)Worm hole
2)Hyper drive
3)Tachyons[1]
[1]Hypothetical sub-atomic particles that are always faster-than-light.
PS.Did you read Rainbow Leap?
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Actually, no to all your questions. They aren't going backwards in time, none of those theories explain how it happened in MY story, and I've never heard of that fic.
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>never heard of that fic
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Your argument is invalid.
(or perhaps you didn't look at the title?)
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Alright, you got me. I haven't read it yet and I didn't see the title either.
Ok. I've decided to write 8 chapters for this story, and make 2 sequels off of it. In total, that's 24 chapters.
Can anypony guess what the other 2 books are going to be about? 
I have read up to chapter 5 seems a bit rushed >.> I'm not the "writey" type of pony so I have nothing to suggest =/ I look forward to more though ^^
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About the same thing, but from other perspectives?
Note - Create something that has more than 3 dimensions, and it will create black hole, since at least OUR universe is 3-dimensional, and 4-dimensional being would be beyond time and space (or something), creating black hole. I'll guess that Equestria is also 3-dimensional.
46 seconds in video = beyond the impossible
Harro kfish XD, idk just clicked the link while editing, i think ill tone down my edits cuz >_> i was rewriting all the scentences and that would take more time then i have to edit, but yea i plan on spending my night editing instead of reading, u lucked out on the semianual, jackson doesnt mind writing scenario. I MUST GO, MY PLANET NEEDS ME. Oh btw we should meet irl for some of these things >.< XD tyler doesnt like that idea though :shrugs: lol idk why im posting this 2 u on fimfic
Bad chapter is bad
It looks like it's a bad trip...