• Member Since 19th May, 2012
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Perfect Prime


Saw a lot of FanFics on EQD, so I decided to make an account for reading them. Got my exams in a few days though, so I probably won't do much for a few days. Can anyone actually see this?

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Just how unpredictable is life? In a matter of seconds, a lot can happen, and in hours, so much more. One single, happy filly will have her life changed so quickly, that she might never recover from it.

Constructive criticism is appreciated.

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Comments ( 9 )

I liked writing this, even though it took me about two hours, and it really helped me calm down. I think that this is one of the best FanFics I've ever written, but that's up to you to decide. Might be a little rushed in places but I still liked it. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

544621

2 Hours?!

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

My friend, writing should not be rushed, you should spend some time working on it, revising and proofreading so it comes out as good as possible.

I've been working on a chapter for my story for about two days now, getting together ideas, research (It's based slightly on politics, so I have to do a little research), proofread, and so on.

Don't rush it, spend some time with your fics :pinkiesmile:

548924 lol you sound just like me when I talk about maths, so I know what you're talking about. :pinkiehappy:I'll keep that in mind. I Pinkie promise.

549027

I hope so :derpytongue2:


Trust me, if you can do something that was as well done (Well...not at first) as A Game of Psycopaths, I'm sure you can do much more :raritywink:

I have to say, i really like your writing style. It's descriptive and at times almost a little poetic. Overall it flows very nicely when compared to other fics. I found myself actually reading it rather that just skimming it.

anyway...

The story itself was well written and all that. The ending however seemed rather familiar. Specifically, I saw a very similar thing on website "9Gag" now i know that isn't exactly a reputable site but nevertheless one of their many comics had a very similar story and ending. I'm not calling you out on this, but i was wondering if you got the idea for your story from that site or someplace else? Everything on the internet is pretty much fair game so I don't really mind one way or another.

I'm still definitely thumbing this up. It deserves that and i will check out your other work too.

549598 really? Oh darn it. I got the idea in an english lesson and i thought that it was an original idea. Guess i was wrong then. If you can give me a link, ill put it in the descrption.

For the record, i have never heard of 9gag and i just googled it. I see what you mean when you says its not a reputable site. I couldnt find the comic you mentioned though, so please send me a link and i apologise if they were really similar.:twilightblush:

Oh Shi-
That was good. Really good, actually. Nicely done!

Anyone know what this guy was banned for?

611457 Well, a few comments above yours, 549598 mentioned that this FanFic was suspiciously similar to another piece of work floating around on the internet. I just read it and I think I saw it at some point on memecenter not long ago. Could that be why he was banned, because he didn't credit it?

Notwithstanding him being banned, this story was still pretty good, even if it was just an extension on someone else's work. Two hours for a story does seem astounding. Hopefully, the site only gives perma-bans to those do really, really bad things, and he'll be unbanned soon.

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