Saw a lot of FanFics on EQD, so I decided to make an account for reading them. Got my exams in a few days though, so I probably won't do much for a few days. Can anyone actually see this?
There is no way to determine just what a pony has been through with one single glance, and it is an impossible task; even for detectives. The only ones who really understand anypony is the pony themselves, but that doesn't mean you can't try to. If given the opportunity to either shun sompeony or to accept them, always go for the second option, and never make a pony feel left out.
Constructive criticism is appreciated.
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I have to say, I'm not proud of this FanFic, and I think that this is a clear indicator that the quality of my writing is declining. But, I will publish it because I put a lot of effort into it. Hopefully, some of you can enjoy this. Constructive criticism is appreciated.
I like the writing; I don't think there's any problem there. This is good, and it's got a lot of feeling.
It was a nice read. 14 out of 15 Yogstars
548848>>548872 Thanks for the kind words you guys! This was a rushed project to help cool me down right before my exams, so I can understand if it wasn't perfect.
548892 I fail to see how this is a rushed story. I mean, no grammatical errors and beautifully written, it's almost as if Derpy was introducing herself to me in person. I hope to see more stories like this.
551022 You have no idea how happy I am to read your comment.
Thanks mate, and making it seem like a personal introduction was what I was hoping for.
I thought it'd be rushed because I also typed this one up in a few hours and only proof-read it once instead of the usual two or three times. Also, there were some parts in the story that I thought were a bit forced like the incident with her mother, Spitfire and Blaze leaving, and Dinky, but I couldn't make it seem any less rushed to me, so I just left it as it was.
It's good to hear that even though that was my impression of the story, others still think it's a decent read, and that's good enough. I typed this up on Saturday morning along with Dead of the Night and whilst I thought that one was really good, I wasn't as attracted to this one. They did what I wanted them to, and that was to calm me down before exams and all that.
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ENOUGH DERPY!
Very heartwarming.
It was really nice. It started a bit dull, but those parts about Derpy and her family deserve a prize. The last third of the story is simply perfect.
I usually don't like emotional stories, but I have to fav this one.
Other: My username has nothing to do with bubbles, or Derpy for that matter.
This is probably the best Derpy based Slice of Life fic I've ever read, you did great.
Dude, I don't understand what you mean you weren't proud with this. It was great. -manly tears were shed-
559870 I think he meant that he felt there were places that could have turned out a lot better if he had planned them out more, and if he had re-written it a few times. I think he'd be glad to know that you liked his FanFic so much.
absolutely loved it, briliantly written and rather minimilistic allowing me to reamain concentrated and form my own thoughts around it, excelent work, you had me smiling most of the way through.
547188 if its good enough for me to spend 2 hours dwoloading it and converting it, then transfering it onto my tablet, then its pretty damn good
god, I just keep reading this story. Its so good, I think its what inspired me to write my best story, Littlw piece of Grey, and for that i thank you.
798213 I'm sorry, I'm not the original author but I do agree that it is a very good story. I read it every now and then and it never seems to get old. It's good to see that other people like the story too I suppose.
o.o Not gonna cry. Not gonna cry. Not gonna - GODDAMMIT ;_;
1475354 I refuse to believe that you managed to read the entire story that quickly
1475359 :P Years ago I joined a summer-camp that included a class in deep speed reading.
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I've been a holy terror to the printed word ever since.
1475370............................................Nice
1475374 Lookit all those dots D: GRAPES ON PARADE!
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Also, enjoy that Casio! :D
1475377 I'm lovin' it, thank you!
.........................I'm hungry now.
MCDONALDS, I'M ON MY WAY!
1475382 Travel Safely!
On a scale of one to ten, I give this a 12. It shows a perfect example of derpy's life, and the pain she felt. I also like how you added extra things like how her mom died, instead ofjust Derpy getting a note saying her mom was dead or something. Continue writing your other fanfics,
RD3999
This was a touching and well-written story. I'm reading it for the first time, four years on. I've never seen the Equestrian school system described in such detail, that was nice. Good job.