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Darknight293


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(Special thanks to thegreatcat14 for letting me use her art and corrupting giving me a new way to look at Sonata XD.)

You've been dating Sonata Dusk, a siren from another world, for about 8 months now. But after coming home from a long day at work at the supermarket during the winter season, you find her drinking out of something that you never expected to see in your life.

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Gskar #1 · Jan 21st, 2015 · · 1 ·

This was both cute and romantic :heart:
I loved it !! Liked and faved.

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Glad ya liked it! Also I can tell those three down votes are haters or jealous people because about 19 of those 22 views are me making and editing the chapter so the three up votes must be the people who read it. XD

Well that was adorable.
SONATA IS BEST SIREN!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww ..... *BOOM* uh so it is possible to cause that to explode:yay::yay:

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Uh.....maybe? I dunno but it went boom didn't it? Anyway, glad to see you liked it.

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Nice. Always a good story when it reminds you of one you wrote yes?

It's interesting because Sonata's outfit does look like little kids' clothes, with the highly visible stitching and really large buttons,

I died from adorableness.

Well done. I couldnt resist going awwww soo cute. Sonata is adorable.

More... Sequel!!

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Glad you liked it...but a Sequel? Tempting...but I had a sequel for Shimmering Sunset planned involving the Dazzlings. But we'll see.

D'awwww....
Thanks darknight. :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome...

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BUT YOU PUT IT ON A PROPANE GRILL?!:flutterrage:

In all seriousness, glad ya enjoyed it.:twilightsmile:

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Thanks. I might read your story Battle of the Beats later since I'm so bored right now.:ajsleepy:

This is a really nice and cute story, but there are a couple of things you may want to edit.

You set the bags down on the coffe table and sit on the couch next to her, she holds the cup tightly and looks down at the floor.

The first thing is that "coffee" is misspelt, and the second is that the comma should be a semi-colon.

But I admit this is rather wierd seeing how old you are, but you do look young you know!

And lastly, that should be "weird".

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Thanks for telling me! I'll fix them right now.

this was so cute you get nose boops, like all the nose boops
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stay classy:moustache:

I swear this just presses that Male-Instinct button like a hamster on coffee.

Must. Cuddle. Sonata-kuuuuun!!:heart:
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Wait...did I just type that? :twilightblush: eeep

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I'm happy to say that you did. Also, Sonata!:pinkiehappy:

This was simply one of the MOST adorable fic i have ever read! For your work here take a like and a mustache :moustache:

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I shall take this like and mustache.

Cute, albeit a little different. A few run-on sentences but nothing major. I'll give this a like.

THat was good. A different but interesting way to look at Sonata, Very cute. Well done:twilightsmile:

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I'll probably hunt those run-on setences down later anyway.

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Indeed it is. I still blame thegreatcat14 for it.:ajsmug:

Hmmm, that was interesting, cute little one shot, I like it.

Comment posted by Clocklike deleted Mar 14th, 2015

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Well that's embarrassing. :twilightblush:

OMG! Can´t ... Contain ... All this cuteness! GAAAAAAAAAAAH!

I don´t even know if you lose, or get a men-card for loving this. Either way: Have my thanks for making this so adorable!:pinkiehappy:

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Always glad to see, or hear, someone that enjoyed one of my one-shots or stories. They're all inspired by their cover art made by other people. ^^

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Huh...

My ideas mostly come from music I mean sure, the KH crossover is from a videogame, but I can´t write it without the respective soundtracks playing in the background.

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Yeah, I do listen to music while writing. But the first part of the idea comes from the picture.

This was CUTE.:yay: I loved it! (I am over obsessed with the Dazzlings so yeah :facehoof:) But anyway this was adorable and I really liked it a lot.:pinkiehappy:

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Always happy to hear people enjoy what I write. That being said I need to get all the stuff in Real Life done so I can get back to writing.

Like, I'll watch Castle and think "Damn, these writers are good!"

Cute and very loving, nicely done. :raritywink:

Easily one of the cuter, more adorable stories I've seen on this site. Sonata being conscious of her years and coping with it this way is odd, but in an adorable way.

I always like stories that are sweet And not sexual.

Well done! Thumbs up

NOPONY EXECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION to have a really weird boner right now

That was cute and adorable… ! I love it!

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