• Member Since 18th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen Apr 17th, 2019

Kickback


You're stupid pretty. I'm pretty stupid.

T

Aria Blaze falls in love.
And it's the worst.
Actually, this could possibly be the worst thing to ever happen.
Ever.
For realzies.

Art by http://thegreatcat14.deviantart.com/

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 101 )

Inspired by The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy? You mean that episode where Mandy falls in love and... *gulp* ...smiles?

I love this!!

Nice story so far! :twilightsmile: As for your AN, you should totally make this into a ship-fic

I was interessted in this fanfiction because of Aria, and even if i am not sure, if i understand that guy yet, i have to say he seems interessting to for me.

I guess i read more of this fanfiction.

5604185 Ya wanna evaluate on that, Captain Originality?

Comment posted by Thunder Lightning deleted Feb 9th, 2015

5608010 Oh, no, please. I would just LOVE to hear your expertly crafted opinion and professional critique! Maybe I can read some of your stuff for inspir-Oh, that's right, isn't it, fucker? You haven't written anything. Therefore, your opinion is the equivalent of Ricky Gervais' shit.

Take that bullshit negativity off my comment section.

5608031 I just don't like it. there ya go, the finger has been removed

This fic is begining to remind me of a certain episode of the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy...
That is not a bad thing, by the way

5610306 That's cause it's based off the exact thing you're thinkin' 'bout, dude.

5610394

Even better, then

I hope this doesn't end like the way I think.
Pleas tell me it doesn't end that way???

I have no idea how this has gotten the burst of good feedback that it did.

It's new to me.

the only reason i can think of, right now is maybe because it is Aria with her special personality, probably one that is not used often (i don´t know), and because it is a bit different than the actually movie.

However, i really like it, and even if i hope that he is showing some emotions or we get to know his personality a bit better around the 4 or 5 chapter, i can´t really complain about the story, so....good work.

Don´t get me wrong, i like Grimlock somehow, but i am really eager to see the first time they really speak with each other, or which reason they get to finally speak with each other, detention maybe?, and does it change the ending of the movie?

So the episode I guess would be the first time Mandy had a crush, if so if this I'd base of that ep then don't let it end like it :fluttershysad:

5610841 What way?
5612997 No, not that dude, he's too groovy... though the O in OC is pushin' it a little

Grimlock? As in Dino-Bot transformer leader Grimlock?

"Why, Mandy, you're in love!"

...Aria, please don't tell your sisters that you want your heart cut out. XD

Knowing what this fic was inspired by makes the title all the more meaningful. But with no reaper around, she gonna ask Redheart to cut it out?

"This!"

All at once, Aria's whole body snapped.

Her muscles convulsed under her skin, her arms slumped to her sides and her neck slouched forward more. She could hear the rapid beating of her heart in her ears, feeling the blood burn in her veins. It was warm. Everything was warm. Her tongue softly lolled slightly out of her mouth as her lips were cracked and forced into a droopy, dumb smile. Her eyes rolled to the sides and her eyelids lowered steadily. She blinked. Very slowly. Her head swam with euphoria and it felt good. Aria didn't like that. Not one bit. Her entire figure relaxed into what could be classified as a sluggish mess.

somehow strange to read it like that, but i like it, and even if i don´t rememver which hair based name she has for which person, i enjoy her POV

Lavender Unicorn Syndrome! :pinkiegasp:
You lost me halfway through the chapter. I had to re-read 3 times to figure out who Rainbow Head and chopstick lips were. But once I did, it was a good read!

5624815 S-Shut up, Dude! Spoilers!
5627178 Oh...you hurt me, sir. LUS? Is that what it sounds like? Awww, I try to write it as Aria bein' a cynical, mean punk that names people based on their appearances...Like David Spade!

5628601 Yeah, I understand. :pinkiesmile: Can't think of any better substitutes, so continue what you're doing.

Aria gritted her teeth. "Your friends said that you just up and felt sick out of nowhere."

The warmth was still there. Why? "...Aria, was it?"

It gets confusing when you have one character's actions or thoughts on the same line as another character's words.

And also, I get what you're trying to do with the nicknames but it does get distracting when you change them every other line. Keeping them consistently "The Worst" and "Cheese Head" throughout the story would probably be better. Also, "The Worst" should always be capitalized when referring to Sonata, because otherwise it makes the sentence difficult to parse.

Seeing as she's not human, she may actually be able to cut it out. Though I wonder how this will effect her singing?

Funny how Aria has troubles with her emotions.

I started thinking about that song by Paramore as soon as I read the chapter title and, sure enough, the first few lines of the song are posted at the beginning of this.
Funny.

First rule of having a crush: Never admit you like him to yourself until you'd go crazy if you didn't. (Source: Personal experience. :pinkiecrazy:)

Remember when their fans were... ya know supportive?
Then they did something no other band has done before, experiment. Which of course caused some of the 'fans' to go bat-shit insane in their screeching that LP wasn't a rock band anymore, how it was turning into a boy-band, how there were supposed to return to the old days of Hybrid Theory and blah, blah, blah.
Heck LP acknowledged that and gave 'fans' and gave them a sweet middle finger by the name of their song Guilty All the Same.

Nice chapter BTW, Is it going to end like the episode?

One would think Sonata holds a grudge with how willingly she agreed to commit murder.

5683934 Think, just think about what you just said
What if Nirvana was still going? What if they did a full 180 and turned into, I dunno, fuckin' new-age pop? Do you think people would just say "Alright, cool" to something like that?
It's all relative. Bands shouldn't change their genres. Band members should go form new bands but they shouldn't change.

5644998 Uhh...yeah, that's kinda what I do. Sorta why my propic is what it is. Music and ponies.

5645616 I'll drink to that.

5684283 Sorry it's just how you phrase it is like your saying anything new that Linkin Park tries to do, something no band has the guts to do, immediately sucks.
It's just irritating.
LP is a rock band we know that, but the members are also people, and some people can get creative, whether that's good or bad it depends.
But I hate, and I repeat HATE it when people bash them for 'not being a rock band anymore' and that anything that isn't rock that they produce is immediately shit. Facts they like to experiment, they want to try new things instead of screaming, yelling and banging their heads. And the best thing, they don't forget their roots to a rock band, they try new things, they mix a few things up. Afterwards, they'll rock out a new rock song if/when they can get the muse for it. That's what makes LP one of the greatest bands of now, they like to try new things and they can still manage to let out a rock song or two when they want to.

This is pretty much turning into that one episode of The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy.

Saying it like that made her want to grab it out of the sky and punch it in it's stupid non-face, that'd show it to mock her.

This was literally the first thing that came to mind :pinkiehappy:

Remember when Linkin Park was...ya know, good?

I have no idea what you're talking about. Linkin Park is awesome :scootangel:

It's only, you know, one of major things that keep her stupid bipedal body going but she could do it and if she died, she haunt these two idiots for the rest of forever.

Congratulations, Aria, you're the new Nappa :rainbowlaugh:

Sorry Could Not Help Myself:rainbowlaugh:

The Title of this chapter made me laugh so hard:rainbowlaugh:

Other then that good story

This is alright so far, but for some reason OC Grimlock rubs me the wrong way. I'm not quite sure what I'm supposed to like about him. I don't really hate him, but I don't really like him yet either...

, it was lightt but the walls were dark,

5766960 And that's how you're supposed to feel about him
Conflicted
Just like our heroin

I don't think I've ever gave this story a review. Huh.

Well anyway, this story is fucking fantastic.

Ara reached up to pull the white stem

And now they're all alone. Wonder what's gonna happen...

5608054 you. . . . . . Again, :facehoof: really man? Really? :facehoof:

5799616 Oh, come now
You're just sayin' that

Login or register to comment