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Four year old Sapphire is the daughter of Adagio Dazzle and Sunset Shimmer. Cynthia is Five years and is also the daughter of Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze. The lovely mothers pretty much set up a playdate for them with a nice small picnic, enjoying the Saturday morning, until Cynthia asked Sapphire a question.
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Was cute. Have an upvote. And I feel like your grammar structure and flow here have improved quite a bit from some of the older stuff I'd seen on dA. Still a few little things here and there (like a comma instead of starting a new sentence in a place or two, and a couple missing words) but nothing that really broke the flow for me. Enjoyable.
6556416 Thank you for the critique.
I liked it.
a couple of missing words here and there though.
You get a cookie(upvote).
Hope theres a story when their teenagers