Forced Sleepover

Tired of their rivalry and hatred for one another in Canterlot High, Adagio and Sunset's mothers force them to have a sleepover.

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Captawesome

Captawesome #1 · Oct 23rd, 2015 · · ·

OmniFox

OmniFox #2 · Oct 23rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

What if they made out the instant their moms come home?

SShonix

SShonix #3 · Oct 23rd, 2015 · · ·

You got the first like from me!

bearwolf216

bearwolf216 #4 · Oct 23rd, 2015 · · ·

6558481 they could say that they truly bonded

Vocal Chord

Vocal Chord #5 · Oct 27th, 2015 · · ·

Hmm...from a reader's standpoint, it's pretty good, but unfortunately, I'm a writer, and I can't overlook a few things.
1.) Fix up the grammar a bit. Not too many people know how to properly punctuate, it seems.
2.) Don't rush it. It's a good story, but it could do with a bit more volume, perhaps?
But, as a whole, I give it four stars out of five. Good job there.

EncoreP

EncoreP #6 · Apr 9th, 2021 · · ·

"I know what! But surely there's really somebody who is living like that in the world." Sunset said sniffing away a tear."

"I know that!"

Bookwurm666

Bookwurm666 #7 · Oct 1st, 2021 · 1 · ·

Sunset: Hey Adagio, want to go beat up on Trixie?
Adagio: I thought you'd never ask.

maeeui

maeeui #8 · Sep 13th, 2022 · · ·

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kitsune_shadow

kitsune_shadow #9 · March 18th · · ·

6558481
sunset's mother: I think the plan worked really well.
adagio's mother: now how are we going to explain to them that we wanted them to get along, because we're dating?

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