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Kickback


You're stupid pretty. I'm pretty stupid.

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[PROTOTYPE CROSSOVER]
Fate.
Some say it is evil, a cosmic puppet-master bent on controlling our lives through improbable yet predetermined ways.
A few say that the hand of fate is what guides them, shows them the path to live the way they were always meant to.
Others don't believe in it.
However, when a common high school student is inexplicably plucked out by Misfortune's hand to undergo possibly a fate worse than death , who is to blame?

Perhaps it is more than Fate, perhaps it is even Destiny or perhaps it was simply Nature that had selected him, to become a part of something more than himself.

Regardless of what's to blame...

"...What the Hell is happening to me!?"

*Tags will be added*

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 35 )

And they said reboots were bad. Screw that! Lookin' forward to sein' more of this fic!!!:twilightsmile:

4430105 Cheers mate:twilightsmile:
But Oh, God, the original...I don't even wanna think 'bout it :facehoof:

Add the human tag if the characters are humanized, buddy. I came here expecting ponies, not furless monkeys.

Holy shit... It's back

So far... It seems like a sequel to a long lost story... Anyone happen to download the previous story way back when, please send it to this author.

Also I became German in the last few days, also I mean no offense to any Germans here, in fact, I'd like you to teach me some if you can, please?

Wow, almost as soon as I find out you cancelled the original, I find your reboot. Amazing story so far, though I with it wasn't EG.

Good formatting.
Everything else sucks tho.

Wow, that was good.
Really good.
I cant wait to see more.

Comment posted by CoatedHades436 deleted Jan 10th, 2015

Wait, so kickback, didn't originally have the virus in him?

He got it during his school years?

Or before?

Like your story can't wait for more:raritywink:

Vinyl could spot the briefest image of a scarlet-hued face

Is this Anthro, with weirdly colored human (like in Equestria Girls), or normal human colors and he just has a reddish skin coloring? I hope it's the latter, Anthro stories just rub me the wrong way. Anyways, interesting start, let's see what happens next chapter.

Interesting reboot, but I'm rather curious why you A) made this happen in the Human world, not too much of interest to do there comparatively, no magic, no dragons, no Elements of Harmony, no Alicorns who move the Sun and Moon through the sky, and B) why you decided to Expy Alex and Dana, rather than using Alex and Dana.

4437986 what the hell was I thinking when I wrote this...

Awesome character development and suspense-building. Can't wait to see where this goes next!

Everyone seems to be complaining about what, as far as I can tell, is an excellent story. Personally, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

Can't wait for some kick ass prototype action!

I was actually listening to You're Gonna Go Far Kid as I read this xD

Then friends we shall be. Also always glad to see this updated.

This is the best prototype story I've seen so far

You had me at mother Theresa on a, Mercedes was it? You my friend are in my top five prototype fics.

Comment posted by Phys deleted Oct 8th, 2016

Now here they were, both of them recoiling back in the lounge room.

*flips over back of chair*

when will the next chapter be out?

Why was this cancelled it was going so good!

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