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Applebloom has a huge crush on Spike, always has. She knows that Spike won't ever love her like she loves him, because dragons don't go with ponies... no matter how hard she dreams.
Apple blooms new dream is born when Fluttershy and Discord admit to all of their friends that they're dating, and Applebloom confides in them about her crush.
Will her new dream come true or will she have to go find a new new dream?
(pairings that you might see in this fan fic)
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The title makes me cringe.
So far so good
"Apple Bloom's* New Dream" It'll turn people off if the punctuation in your title is faulty.
Ok so this has a lot of promise but you should really proofread for spelling and grammer errors before you submit the story, also Apple Bloom has a space in it XD.
Um...Yeah, realistically AB would have a broken spine and so would Spike...
...But this is Ponies so, yeah. Logic! What's that?!
All kidding aside though, I love all Spikebloom! So, have a favourite and a like!
I hope to see more soon...
...Oh hey another chapter!
I got a bit lost through the story since it seemed to run a mile a minute...
...But it didn't detract from the cuteness so squee!
Also, since Spike seemed to still have feelings for Rarity in the first chapter, he seemed to jump to her quite quickly.
And for me...Well, I don't mind how you spell Applebloom's name. I also thought it was one word and I still use that spelling. On FanFiction it's spelled Applebloom, on FiMFiction it's Apple Bloom.
But all in all, I still like. Please continue! I don't see this pairing enough on this site!
But take your time, you're all good.
Next chapter please.
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Thank you for all of the feedback! I'll try and be better in my future chapters! This means so much that you guys have done this!
That seems...unusually cruel to do to poor Spike. Rainbow and Pinkie I could maybe understand due to them being the 'pranksters' of the town. But Fluttershy wouldn't condone it and I don't see Twilight breaking her best friend/brother-figure's trust like that.
Though I can see the Apple family teasing Lil' AB over something...Though I don't really know what. Must have missed something in the last chapter, I should probably reread that.
All in all though, the story's pacing is much better now. It reflects their feelings quite well with AB's hopelessness and Spike's lovestruck nature. Quite in character too when you think about it as well.
So you, good sir (or Ma'am), deserve a moustache!
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Thank you for this feedback! In the future chapters I will be sure to be a bit more considerate... You doing this is really helping me learn! Thank you, this means ALOT!
5491111 I have actually changed the story, That may mean it isn't that good. But what you said made me think and yeah its true... It was kinda mean:unsure sweetie:SO yeaaahhhh... Maybe this is better??
5489117 Its up
5488108 Is it better?
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Yes, thank you.
5491303 Yeah, this is much more realistic.
Thanks for taking my words into consideration and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Pinkie13Pie levelled up in Story Telling!
Seriously though this is much better than the previous versions of the first 2 chapters and I'll be sure to reread them and see how they've changed.
Keep up the good work! :D
5491303 Yay new chapter.
I love it!! Please put more chapters
5500456 I'm currently writing the next one
and I'll tell you when I do
Well, that clears the laughing Apples part up nicely!
All in all, this was a good chapter and I'm glad to see it updated! Have a Pinkie!
I eagerly await the next chapter!
Well then, now that this has been settled...
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5500456 it is up :)
When will the next chapter be out???!!!!!
5528466 It'll be out in another 3-4 days maybe? Thank you for your optimism! It means more than you think :D I'll let you know when its out ;)
Bittersweet? Aww...
Oh well...I can't exactly see how it'll be bittersweet by the end. They both seem to be crazy about eachother!
But I'm just a SpikeBloom nut.
...Oh and the chapter was pretty good. Short but solid. So have a Pinkie
Im still not so sure about the dragon and pony shipping but this is great I am starting to really like SpikeBloom shipping good job so far Im reading the rest most definatly
5541447 Ha Ha, That was me in the beginning! I thought it was totally ridiculous, but then I started reading some fan fic about it, then seeing fan art and here I am! LOVING IT!
I squeeeed so many times my grandmother looked at me like I was crazy! I WANT MOAR!
please
And YES! BUTTONBELLE SHIPPING!!!
Sorry but its my most favortist favorite ship EVAH!
5541592 You are WAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY too kind!!!
5528466 Here you go! ;)
Alright! A new chapter!
Oh Spike, 'secret admirers' are sometimes seen as sweet, though they may seem like 'stalkers' to others. tsk tsk.
AB going to Fluttershy for advice? Seems legit.
I only saw one spelling error, nothing to lose your head over mind you. It's when Spike got started on writing the letter. You wrote 'right' instead of 'write'. Again, nothing major, just thought I'd let you know.
I look forward to the next chapter!
5547425 Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!! I'll edit it right now!!
OMC A new CHAPTER! I'm eatin a choclate cake so I'm Hyperventilating more than when Pinkie eats a chocolate dipped cupcake with hotscauce on top! When I saw the part when Fluttershy asked about the wedding I laughed so abruptly I felt I was going crazy!
But seriously I loved it cant wait till the next one!
Aww, I love this so far! So sweet>w<
Amazing job!
5548058 Thank you so, so much! I just can't explain how much this means to me !!!
5549547 Thank YOU!!!!! I jut love, love, love you!!!! (in a platonic way ;D)
You both mean the WORLD to me! You guys keep me writing!
5549679 Youre so welcome!
XD
5549679 You are very welcome my dear
You deserve mustaches
Spike made it a little to obvious that he was the one who wrote the letter.
Oh, so that's what you meant by literally. Bit quick though.
This story has some kind of pace that feels... strange. I like it. We need some crazy stories on this site every once in a while.
Yeah, this is a little cheesy. Don't let that discourage you.
If Spike is trying to be discreet, then having the mention of gems in that letter isn't a way to do it.
I think it was Discord who kind of gave it away. The letter was ambiguous enough, I felt, since he didn't use her name and ponies in Ponyville MUST know what gems look like, so yeah. Gems are known as things of beauty that most people in our own world compare features with them to try and pick other people up.
Also, no errors or mishaps that I could spot! You're a very fast learner
I shall eagerly await the next chapter with a smile on my face!
...and Pinkie's
*hyperventalating from so Much CUTENESS!!!
BEST THING EVAH!! 
Oh my fudge please we need MOAR this story is to flippin Die for (not literally anyways) but the discord talk with apple bloom
You deserve a five mustache rating
Damn, I just caught up and I think Im going to faint.
OMFG ADFGHJKL SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*Faints*
5598690 You know, I was scared to read your comment, because I don;t really like that chapter, I really don't. So I thought you and other people would just be like, 'It was really bad' etc.
So when I read your comment, I smiled. THANK YOU DEAR SIR OR MA'AM! <3
Aww that's cute...
...Though it was kinda anti-climactic. There was the entire build up of the story and it just kinda ended. Oh well, it was a simple enough ending, it's just that they did just tell eachother their feelings pretty easily considering how much build-up there was for how difficult it was supposed to be.
Ah ignore me, I'm just sad that it's over!
Oh and the character tags for Cheese and Soarin doesn't really make any sense. Soarin was mentioned in one chapter and I haven't seen hide nor hair of Cheese. It'd make more sense if Discord had a character tag since he was a VERY pivitol character in here.
Hope to read your others stories soon. Good luck with future stories!
I see stars in my eyes.......
No literally I'm crying make it stop!!!!!
I loved it but please and try to fit your schedule for a sequel
PPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE?!