Fluttershy finds an old box in the back of her closet. She doesn't realize what terrible things this box will bring back to her. And it is time to set it all right.
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Oh hey! It's been approved!
I'll keep watch!
5466112 hey dude i was just reading story and found u
hey do u like my story
No, this sucks.
5467247 Care to explain why it sucks?? It's kinda bitchy to just fucking say it sucks.
Well written, few errors, interesting idea, good details, the setting and scene could use a bit of tweaking, but all in all an excellent start. I look forward to where this leads.
Exellent! I wonder what's going to be in the box...
In my opinion, this is well-written and a great story idea. I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
5467291 And it's kinda bitchy complaning about my comment. Have you seen the rate?
5468523 I wasn't complaining about it.. I just wanted to know why you thought the story sucked. And what about the rate??
5468523 Is that what you say to boost your self-confidence?
5468534 I wasn't talking to you.
5468539 You posted your stupid comment on a public website.
5468542 Ya, but you mind your own buissnuess.
5468547 Damn, what'd you have for breakfest? Bitch flakes?
5468550 No, shut up, whore.
5468556 Excuse me? The best thing that ever came out of your mouth was a dick.
5468558 No. You are a slut
5468566 That's so funny. The last time I heard that, I fell off my dinosaur.
5468575 No, just back off and go get drunk!
5468584 Is this coming from the poster child for abortions?
5468590 OMG NO KJUST BACK OFF AND SHUT UP
5468594 You make the guys on Jackass look like Einstein.
5468597 No, i'm not stupid, just shut up bitch.
5468601 If I throw a stick, will you leave?
It be good. Left on cliffhanger. With Sofa ad at the bottom. Nvm. Will watch for more.
organised manner
5468601
If you're not stupid, then why insult the story, the author, people commenting, and then proceed to complain that people are insulting you back?
Don't insult something someone put lots of effort into, if you don't like it just ignore it, or give constructive criticism. Not hate.
Now continue to get pummelled by everyone's favourite animatronic.
The box of truth?
5468601
Okay... So maybe you're starting to sound like those ten-year olds playing COD who unfortunately have a microphone in their possesion...
You know how immature you sound, bro? Might wanna consider looking over your comments and see how you feel if your own comments were directed at yourself before you let loose.
nice story!
when chapter 2 ?
5517243 I was actually planning to write it the day after this one.. But i got lazy. Should be out at least a few weeks..