• Member Since 19th Sep, 2013
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Palm Palette


Keep palm and palette on.

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Fluttershy's life starts to fall apart when somepony steals something very near and dear to her. She'll do anything to get it back, anything, because if she doesn't... well, that thought is just too horrible to imagine.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 12 )

This is absolutely brilliant! Please do more, I would love to see this keep on going. Your writing is good, the details are good, the whole story is amazing! But one thing, how does one lose its cutie mark?

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I was like :rainbowhuh: because I read to quickly but then I understood it and was like :raritycry: but then :flutterrage:

Well, this turned into a [Crossover] out of nowhere. :rainbowhuh:

You really did pump out the chapters, a brilliant story. Well done. :twilightsmile:

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They're just name references. The story really doesn't have anything to do with Zelda.

When did all these chapters come out? I'm sure they were not here this morning. Eh. Love the story, even if I have only read 4 chapters so far!

That was one horrible ending. So scary

A fantastic, story, but it leaves so many things unanswered. What's Fluttershy's special talent? Is she a hunter now? What was Linksy's goal, and what was the artifact? Will Shining Armor and Cadance catch her?

This is a really good story. But, and this is a big but, the ending... doesn't feel like an ending. There are a few open questions, but I think the most apparent ones are; What happened to Linky? Did Shinning find her in the woods or not? Is there some way for everything to return to its rightful place?

Also this could use a dark tag.

“Hey, since you're here, do you want to sign my get well card?” Pinkie held up a large greeting card. The inscription read, ‘Hang in there.’

Should I feel bad for laughing out loud there?

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