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This shows promise, I shall watch for more
It's TwiLuna, so it goes on top of my Read Later list.
Small fixes for the description:
confides
delete 'tell'
So love the TwiLuna hope more soon
More pwease
Silly Twilight, Luna only raises the moon
This....worries me slightly.
There is a reason politics are so cloak and dagger, a single word out of place can crumble empires.
This is something that I see often, Equestria is not the center of the universe, in fact, it appears to be a very peaceful nation, which means that they rely on other nations for many things (I assume, as the best way to broker peace is through trade, so that nopony benefits as much from attacking the other if they risk cutting off something important.)
And if one of the other delegates (say...the griffons for arguments sake) are very Anti-LunaXTwilight, they may not go to war directly, but a severed trade agreement for something important can be worse then a charging army, especially if it effects the Nobles, who in turn, try and turn on Celestia.
...And if the Griffons are NOT the only ones who disapprove, Equestria could be put in a shitty spot if they lose enough trade.
Can't wait to read what will happen at the Gala
Keep up your good work
i agree with Princess Luna they is ways to have a foal or foals even if those two pony's are both mares
well it is understandable why Twi felt like that when they treated her like princess so dating Luna who they still treat like a princess so they might see it as wrong for them be to together so i don't see Twi acting silly just from knowing how they treated her when she 1st become a princess
nice hope more soon love this
5487508 i hope to see more of this story too
5487500
True but in this story Twilight isn't a princess yet. She's not going to be until after they get married.
5487523 you didn't on this she's not an alicorn so i thought she was one
5487624
Yeah my bad...glad you still like the story though.
Another great chapter :)
5487644 why would Twi not being an alicorn not like it? or are you taking about Twi being silly about her friends? because i do see Twi over reacting to dating a princess, i can't even see her asking a Princess out as she fell like she say no and she loss them as friends so i think your Twi is very Twi X3
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Thanks
5489127 can you please spoiling your story, i wish to like your story not have it spoiled for me
5489156
Opps
5489207 i got a question when will the next chapter come out for this story
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Sometime next week, now I know that it seems like a while and I will try to upload at least once a week but between school and work it's tough. I hope you don't mind.
5489250 ok and i don't mind at all
5489207 it's ok
LOL LOVE IT
can't wait to read more
So funny
hope more soon 
I normally don't like Twuna, but this tackles a subject that has a lot of issues where I live quite well, and I actually do like it. I'll definitely keep my eye out for more. A nice read as it stands.
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Thanks that was the intention
good thing about where i work... I am the manager so i get to have the hours i want. as long as i work 40
Love this story can not wait fore more
Funny but so good
LOVE IT
but now I'm wondering something Celestia was Shining Armor and Cadence Minister so wouldn't it be her again since more then likely she would want to do it for her sisters and her students wedding but then again Cadence is a alicorn as well and might wan to be the Minister for Twilight so i gees the first thing I'm wondering is were Celestia and Cadence is going to fight over who is going to be the minster to the point that they take it to Luna and Twilight and freak them out were Shining Armor has to stop Cadence and Discord hast to stop Celestia?!
another thing I'm wondering is you had Celestia and Twilight's friends asking or pushing Twilight or Luna about planing the wedding so are you going to have Shining Armor, Twilight's parents and Cadence do it to one or the other or even both as well
Just wondering you don't have to tell me if you don't want to and i hope to read more soon
Another good chapter, but one thing...
You are still writing it Apple Jack, not Applejack as you should^^
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Yeah I'm sorry its just I have already spoiled the story for some readers so I don't want to spoil any more I want you to be surprised.
5618166 that is fine i under sand thank you for letting me know and can't wait to read what happens next i bet it will be a grate chatter
5618077
Sorry about that on another fan fiction I wrote some of the grammar nazis kept saying that Applejack was two words. Thank you for the correction while this story is only a few chapters in. I will head back and make the necessary corrections. Thank you, sincerely.
5621248
Don't care about them, they're just jealous
Applejack's name is licensed by Hasbro, clearly described as a one word name.
so love this TwiLuna Rules hope more soon
5638996
Thanks
Top 10 on my must read list TY for this master peace of art!!!!!!!!
5 hearts
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Thank you
AWESOME
i like it and i got a question where is Twilight Sparkle and Luna going for their honeymoon now that they are married
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Honestly i haven't decided yet and I'm honestly debating whether or not to do the honeymoon chapter. I know that there is going to be sex but i haven't decided how far it will go yet and...well...depending on how the next chapter goes will depend on if the rating goes from T to M
5686422 please do a honeymoon chapter and ok
Score. So awesome to have a Flutterdash mention in a TwiLuna story
I like where this is going
Celesta and cake... Good. Normal fan take on her. I like it.
Discord.... Ok that came out of nowhere. And in her bedroom?..? Wow. Um. Unexpected, but verry funny. I like that ship too. Now all this would need is some shining armour and cadence and all my pony ships wil have been in your story
5686422
Well you could always skip over sex with a and then they fucked picture picture, or just heavily imply it.
Nice, short chapter but be careful with the content.
On a few spots you were damn close to run into mature tags^^
Anyways, nice one
Love This but a little to short hope more soon
