Twilight went through the mirror to get her crown back. She meets human version of her pony friends but as boys. The Person who took her crown was a boy named Sunset Glare. He wants the crown and Twilight all for himself. Can Twilight get her crown and not get captured by Sunset Glare and can get back to her world before the portal closes in three days.
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Let me bold all the errors, JUST in your descriptions.
Your opinion of the male gender is flattering.
First, then/than. Second, don't say how 'bad' someone is. Show, don't tell. Especially not in your damn summary.
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Sorry. I will in fix it.
this looks interesting
Could I suggest a proofreader?
I'd be happy to proofread for you!
I mean, if you want...
It's fine if you do or if you have one....
I mean...
I've always wanted to proofread
it's ok if you have a proofreader or don't want one...
*blushes*
Sorry, I'm just rambling now.
O. M. G. When will there be more
starman1560 you need a editor. because some parts of your story looks a translation from google translate
Take WolfSketchPegasus up on their offer. You really need a proofreader. Or like get a whole bunch of proofreaders and then you'll be running it through multiple people!
5481898
Your not rambling and yes please thank you. My English and spelling are not the best.
5488607
Thanks, and great! Is that a yes on the proofreading?
5490251
Yes on the proofreading
5495553
Alright. I'll get on that ASAP.
5495556
If is everything I need to fix. Let me know
5495563
Mk. I'll edit the story and send it to you in a pm, is that ok?
5496932
Sure. That is fine.
5499812
Alright. After I'm done, want me to edit your other stories?
5500798
Yes Please. Edit them all and chapters. Because I got words spelled wrong, etc.
5501176 Alright.
When will chapter 2 come out?
5649927
I don't know. Everything you want to see in chapter 2
Hurry up I've been waiting since this came out!!!
How close is it to being done?! It is 2015 I read it in 2014 please hurry with the update!
This story is starting to get a lot interesting, I hope you finish this story, it's so Awesome!!! Also, when will you finish this story, do you need help with the grammars, I'll help you, I'll even give you ideas, how about it?