A boy named Blaze Shine was a transfer student. He is going to his new school Canterlot High School. He makes friends with the mane six and he thinks he will have a normal life. But a evil man named Tirek wants the girls and the keys they are carrying. Can Blaze protect the girls and the keys from Tirek and his gang. Blaze had got to face a something worst that Tirek, himself.
Awesome title, story and picture! Well done my friend
Your story was pretty good, but I noticed a few misspelled words and a few words missing. I recommend a proofreader to help you with these errors. But other than that, I really enjoyed it and I look forward to updates!
three AWESOME CHAPTER
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Thanks
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Thank You
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My writing is not the best but thanks
4742745 No prob
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What do you want to see it the updates
4756346 I guess so, I really want to see what happens next
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Right. I hope to write the next chapter when i can
4756523 Good luck
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Thanks
4756592 You're welcome
Hello there, A.J. Vasquez here. I want to leave my comment on this story, but I want to ask this first; do you only write for fun, don't care what anyone think, or do you want to learn and improve whatever it takes?
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Writing stories for fun, and maybe to improve. My writing skill are not the best.
OMG OMG OMG
I need the next chapter
Bro me thinks you forgot your toast in your effort to not be late for your first day of the school year
um... this plot is sounding awfully like a generic anime... was that your intention?
Omg this is awesome! Can't wait to what is next
When is the next chapter?
The Picture at the end of the chapter doesn't show
When will you make the next?
Continue the story, please?
Continue it, please.
This reads as if it was translated from another language. Go Through your work a few more times before you finish it Just a word of advice Bud