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Gruvian Scripts
Bringing some class to perversion, but not too much.
Gruvian Scripts
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I liked it! Really sweet reading it from Fluttershy's POV. ❤️
Oh it's okay with me.
It's very okay with me. :pinkiegrin:
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Wanted to try something different for my first fic. Don't normally right in 1st person
Nice, but there's a couple of things you may want to edit.
That should be "clitoris".
And I'm pretty sure that should be "manner".
5455221 write....
1.) It's shudder, not shutter.
2.) You have a LOT of extra commas in the middle of sentences. Unless you are dividing up 2 or more separate parts of a sentence, like this, there shouldn't be a comma. This sentence, shouldn't have a comma.
need more of this :)
Will this get a second installment?