Rainbow hears that Trixie is back in town, and that Twilight knows about it, but failed to tell her friends. Thinking something's up, she gets AJ to help her spy on Twilight, for her own good of course, and uses something she got from a purple unicorn stallion that had come to town a few days ago to help with the spying. Of course, things aren't way they seem with this, and the pair end up in more trouble than they expect, though hopefully not more than they can get out of.
(Vore Story, If you're not interested in that, Second Chapter is just Twilight and Trixie bonding. Inspired by the banner here on FiMFiction)
Chapters (3)
...well. I didn't expect THAT to happen. xD
It was a pretty good story.. you got yourself a like! ^-^ Haha ohh boy...
Can't wait till AJ and RD find their way out of that mess...
Literally
~Rosalynn~
Vore story?
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Thanks, it was just something I was inspired to do from the the banner.
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Well, yeah, that's what I put in the description after all. Did you think I was kidding?
Vore is nothing compared to some other kinks out there. I will read later. Got class to go to.
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That I know about, since I've gotten commissioned to write some stuff that is just....wrong. Mind, this is mild vore, and the middle part is actual character stuff. Hope you enjoy class, and the story.
I don't understand the dislikes. The story is going well 'till now.
Why did people thumb down just because the plot of the story? It was very well written and pretty funny. Too bad people don't read it and simply thumbed down. Your characterization was very good.
I like those stories. Make more.
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Thank you for the encouragement, and I intend on writing more stuff. Mind, it'll probably still get voted down by people, it is to sigh.
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That's the plan, people seem to like my garbage for some reason, so I plan on making more. Glad you enjoyed it though.
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Well, I'd like a Chapter 4. Even though I kinda like Vore, I'd want for the two to find their way out. Also, there's something worse: If they don't get out in time, they'll grow bigger and eventually explode Trixie and Twilight. :l
Still, I agree with Lurker. Keep the good work! *thumbs up*
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Thanks always nice to hear. And this is what I consider vore, though I know others have other likes within this fetish, including the graphic ends. If I do continue, it's just going to be a short epilogue, probably set after their 'exit'. And as for the last, well, I'm sure DawnChaser put in something to prevent others from getting injured as well....I would hope so anyway.
Anyway, thanks for the kind words, and I will see about writing more. Possibly random scenes, maybe more vore...or maybe something clop like involving our little spies in the middle. Who wants to read that?
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I hope the Epilogue comes soon.
And I don't like reading clop stuff. I alterady strongly dislike the Clop picture between Rarity and Applejack that appears on the site, so I don't really want to see that. :I
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Heh, are you into macro/micro or vore? I'd assume so, considering the kind words to the story, but that might also be for the characterization, and the adventure part of it too.
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Yeah, I kinda like vore. I plan to make a vore story as soon as I finish the story I'm making right now AND the sequel to the same story.
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Neat, I will admit, your story was interesting but I think you have to know something about TF2 to understand some of the plot, and since I know nothing about TF2 other than one or two of the meet videos(And that there's a mann vs. machine event going on now), I know nothing about that game.
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Team Fortress 2 is my favorite game. Yeah, I heard about MvM, but I didn't knew it was live until another brony told me on the Minecraft Forums. But yeah, unless you really know about TF2, you'll find the story boring, unless if the story REALLY focuses on the ponies.
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Indeed, still, it looks okay, just not something I can comment on.
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Hmmm, ok. I found your story 'Equestria: A Flux Tale' to seem interesting. Once I finish working on Part 6, I'll take a peek on it, and if I like it enough, I'll favorite it.
Also, I tend to favorite things quite often, so it is very likely that I'll favorite your story. I just haven't favorited this because it's too short and quick.
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True, short and quick, but then, it's not supposed to be a major important story, it's just a fetish fic, and something that was fun to write.
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Aww, I like that story.
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I liked writing it, like I said, if you liked reading it, then isn't that enough?
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Well, I'm the type of person who alyways wants more. :P
omg i read this and all i can think of is that AJ is going to buck RD in the teeth when this is all done
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I'd expect so, yes, especially considering how they're getting out if Twilight doesn't find them.
1386347 um the only way twilight will find them is if she and trixie upchucks their meal and for some reason examines the puke lol
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You never know. Applebloom asks her to find her sister, and she uses a spell to do it, and boom, she's found out with AJ and RD were up to.
1386926 but wouldn't she freak out if she found out that she and trixie accidently ate them and that they are probably being digested
did not see that ending coming...at all
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I noticed that it showed AJ not being digested. I think it ain't gonna be a pleasant ride out :)
3098248 well yea it shows her not being digested but if twilight uses a spell to locate her and realizes that she ate her she wouldn't know that she isn't being digested
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fair enough
I had no idea what vore was, so the ending was really unexpected and well not really my cup of tea. But all to their own and it was quite well written, thumbs up
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Heh thank you for understanding, and glad you liked it.
Did not see that coming.
Will enjoy anyway.
I......I thought this was a comedy fic. Well, I guess I'm going to have to meet the doc.
1386347 Probably yeah, not to mention how mad Twilight and Trixie would be. Rainbow is lucky Twilight is kind and understanding, because she might end up taking multiple trips otherwise.
Then again, Twi can be a bit neurotic at times when it comes to teaching lessons, so...
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And it is a lesson that needs to be taught, considering Rainbow really should know better than to ease drop. Loyalty means trust, and really, this whole story shows a lot of mistrust on her part.
7850093 True, though deliberately and knowingly eating Rainbow again would be a bit sadistic, though it honestly is something I could see Twilight doing it if she lost her cool like she does sometimes.
Maybe she would apologize after, once she regained her head, but I could see her going spastic and doing it.
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Eh, I don't see it. Then again, my thing in unaware.
7851113 She once subjected all of Ponyville to what basically amounts to mind rape because she had nothing new to send in the Friendship Report that week. I could see her, albeit barely, doing it.
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That seemed more a spur of the moment thing, and not thinking through a very small thing. Remember, she was just trying to do that to the CMC, she had no idea it would spiral out of control like that.
7851201 That it was spur of the moment doesn't change that it was completely unhinged and downright cruel and irrational. She literally was using a mind-enthralling spell with the intent to use it on children, and wound up using it on the whole village instead.
Multiple episodes have also shown how extreme she is willing to get to teach a lesson, reasonable or not, such as getting all Ponyville involved in getting Rainbow to think she had turned them all into zombies, to the point she tried to commit suicide while Twilight just kinda' stood there and watched.
Hmmm thats alot of hes when Rainbow is a she.