Maybe the cover art would help the surprise part

oh god when pinky screamed out the facts of life i died from laughter, good job.

The ending! I love the ending!

Great job!

Amazing as always. Great job.

D'awwwwwwwwww.

Also, wait.  That ending...  Pinkie blurted that out in the middle of the train station?  Poor Flutters.  

Wow, Big Mac really is a stud. Lol!

Dat endin'

Tealove, you never cease to amuse

Once again, another great Fluttermac fic, with a little bit of Pinkie thrown in for added flavor. Great job Tealove.

short and sweet, gotta love it

LOVE IT!!

heh. Nice ending. =3

THEY HAD SEX AND SEX MAKES BABIES!!

So thats where babys come from...

great fluttermac fic, havent seen a lot of them

Just wanted to say a huge thanks to everyone who has read and of course everyone leaving comments.

Clannad after story?! Yay!

They had sex and sex makes babies!!

>>526796526796 Yes! I heard that line and immediately thought, "That is so something Pinkie would say!"

Before reading this Fic, I thought I would make a "The surprise is butt-sex" joke in the comments, Then it WAS the surprise. I think I may have had something close to a heart attack.

Why are all the Fluttershy/Big Mac stories that I read so short?  It's a great pairing; you'd think that stories about these two would be longer.

That aside, great story.  My emotional subroutines are telling me that I should feel happy.

>>526862526862 Haha, surprise!

>>526866526866 I have one planned for FlutterMac that will be quite lengthy. Promise!

That last line turned it from awesome to priceless!

>>526887526887

Glad to hear it.  If it's anything like this one, I will be one satisfied machine.

Awesome story the only thing that i going to tell you is that if this is related to your CMC matchmakers fic this would be a huge spoiler, but i think that we all already know that this was the main ship in that story, its good to see that your didnt spoil anything about how they started with this relationship and i dont know about the others readers but this makes me expect a few more ships from you about this 2 , loved pinkie pie for sure lol keep up the awesome work you are doing

Jolly good show!!

You sir deserve at least 20 mustaches.

Tealove! Y u so amazing!!!!!!!

Ah Pinks, you so crazy!

What a great story!! Nice *brohoof*

>>526990526990 Nah, this is just a stand-alone random project. I was trying all day yesterday to work on a Harbinger update and nothing was coming so I decided to write something random just to make myself write.

>>527571527571 Hot dang, that's a lotta 'sach!

>>527738527738 You are too kind!

>>526430526430 I know. that was just awesome.

WHO.THE.BUCK  DISLIKED THIS MASTER PIECE??????????

>>530102530102 Probably someone who doesn't like FlutterMac.

It's nice to see you so aptly take on a more light-hearted, almost comedic story. I gotta say I'm in love with your style, just magnificent!

I love Fluttermac, and I'm glad that someone is writting a story that looks so nice and also fun! Please, do more!

OMG That ending, awesome! Now i'm a fan of Fluttermac Pinkie is just so AWESOME

>>531568531568 Thank you! I do tend to lean toward the heavier stuff, but I do have some stuff in the planning stafes that will be lighter.

>>532176532176 I will be! I have a rather lengthy FlutterMac story planned!

>>534626534626 Gotta love Pinkie!

>>536458536458

Lol, it took me this comment to realize this story is already completed and I was like whyyyyy!

But heh, glad you're planning another story !

this story made me feel all fuzzy inside.

Classic Pinkie

>>539201539201 Yay for warm fuzzies!

>>569193569193

My reactions:

I had an idea, but I wanted to ask if it was okay with you first: do you mind if I add this story to the MLP Fanfic Recommendations page on TVTropes?

MOAR!

only complaint is that it is too short...

I just read through several of your one shots—beautiful work. Beautiful.

This one had one typo somewhere, but I don't wanna find it. I'm like Dashie. Laaaaazy. This was really adorable, and the ending was great. The pregnancy was a pleasant surprise, and you have a way of gradually telling the reader everything.

>>16050241605024 Thank you! That is a lovely compliment. I'll have to go through and look for the bad word at some point.

May I suggest rating it mature. Great story though!

a must read for ALL flutter mac fans