Fluttershy is up before the sun to feed her pets. There's only one other pony up that early, and she takes some time to secretly oogle at a certain handsome member of the Apple family.
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Aegis Shield
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Good read. Some slight spelling errors though.
...even the most skiddish of creatures...
I think you meant 'skittish'.
Yes my favorite is Big macxFluttershy so i hope there will be more
Nicely done
But whats up with the blink-blinking and such?
not to complain but it just sounds weird.
Fluttershy runs into Big Mac. Big Mac takes off his plow and turns around. He then kicks Fluttershy so hard that she pisses herself. Big Mac laughs and says, "You wanna be a tree? I WILL treat you like a tree. This is what we do to trees, sister. Boo-yeah!".
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I feel like you could continue the story if you wanted to. Fluttershy and Big Mac are awesome togeather. Applejack was pretty awesome as well. Your stories need more views.
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You're too kind! I just joined yesterday and am loading my pony stories bit by bit. Thanks for noticing me.
Good story. BUT...
"Philly" is spelled "filly."
Rainbow Dash is two words.
Other than that, keep it up! You have a strong start going.
The only complaint I have about this story is the running into part. How many times have we seen this in fics? In movies? And especially in anime? You'd think collisions were a daily occurrence from the sheer number of times it's been used. Despite that I found it a simple, sweet story. One I feel I knew complete when I wore a younger woman's clothes. First to get the reference gets the pride and satisfaction they know a very overplayed Billy Joel song.
I'd also think Twilight would be a little more excited at the prospect of them together, if only because it would allow her to examine something scientifically she hadn't before (I'm assuming), dating. Imagine Big Mac and Fluttershy having a quiet dinner in Twilight's basement while hooked up to a variety of equipment making a variety of noises and printouts. There you go, your next fic for ya right there :).
Despite my nit picking it really is a fun read I'd recommend to anyone who likes it light and fluffly, with a side order of daawwwwwwwww.
I enjoy reading this.
Keep up the good work.
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Don't tell me you've never seen blink-blinking!
Try this video, skip to about 15:05, and watch for 15 seconds. You'll see a blink-blink.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4quMVQhKVXc&feature=g-vrec&context=G285e5abRVAAAAAAAABw
We have once again enjoyed your stories. Please continue
Good for Fluttershy! She deserves to be happy.
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curse you, scratches! you turned me into a shipfic reader....though io have to admit the fluttermac is awesome.
I so do love a good Big Mac X Fluttershy story, it's just adorable.
It's always nice to see a well-written Fluttermac story.
You mentioned your older stories in your last blog post, and I was curious. I am definitely not disappointed.
That picture is on rule34, if you didn't notice, big mac has a sword for his err.. Bravo, Nice story.
Curse you and your open-ended oneshots! Good read though.
unbelievably cute!
Yay! Flutter x Mac
My favorite couple mixed with some sweet stalker elements.
If only this worked in reallity...
That was actually quite sweet
It was simple, yet good. I enjoyed it.
Must...resist...urge...to...do...rewrite...without...author's...permission...
RED ANGEL SEAL OF APPROVAL
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Dawwww HNNNGGGGG awwwww....
Maybe I might draw some fan art for this fic. Don't expect anything really good though, or soon for that matter.
P.S. the youtube link didn't work
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Oh my Princesses MOAR
What if one at a time Flutters' friends went into her room and saw her and Big Mac in bed?
the idea of Fluttershy spying on Mac is hilarious but this is so cute. Yay
ALL of my D'aawwww!
Twilight's reaction. "Huh". That was funny. A very d'awwwwwwww story.
Heh, cute!
DDAAAWWWW
DAWWWWWW
DAWWWWWW
The picture in my mind:
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It was really sweet when Big Mac just casually carried her to the cart and commenced to simply pull her back to her cottage - few words, but such gentle and caring actions. Fluttershy crushing is adorable. I especially loved her little 'yay'.
You also had some really great turns of phrase in this piece:
So cute.
Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing.
This was cute and charming.