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Gravity Falls Fan Group30 stories ·317 members

PonyVille recieves a dorito

It was a calm day in PonyVille, when a vortex suddenly opens up in Twilight Sparkle research facility spewing a certain Dorito... also he falls for Pinkie Pie...

Chapters (2)

A surprise in the lab · 22nd Dec 2014 · 556 words
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Welcome to PonyVille · 23rd Dec 2014 · 827 words
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Halfpaw

Halfpaw #1 · Dec 24th, 2014 · · · Welcome to PonyVille ·

I demand more gravity falls and my little pony crossovers! More I say! Keep up the dorritos!

The Cake Devil

The Cake Devil #2 · Dec 24th, 2014 · · · Welcome to PonyVille ·

Dear Miss Cookie.

Being an avid Gravity Falls Fan, initially I was a little ticked at the title and wondered what the bloody "H" you were doing on my turf. Then I read it and figured out what you were talking about, warenting the only laugh I had while reading this. Where to start, although the idea is there, it's covered in a massive pile of punctuation and spacing errors. You shove far too much information into our face within the small amount of plot you give us. My recommendation, start with combining the chapters, then come back and hit the enter button a few times.

Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.

Cookiecreeper

Cookiecreeper #3 · Jan 21st, 2015 · · · Welcome to PonyVille ·

5421005 Dear Cakedevil,
Thanks for the advice! I do appreciate it and I will try and use this feedback in my future stories. I do admit that this was more of a fun idea/side project that I wanted to make a reality (for the LOLs).
Anywhoosies, I'm not going to freak out and yell at you through caps lock since this WILL help.
Thanks,
Cookiecreeper

Cookiecreeper