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Wrabbit


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Hmm, looks like fun. The code is broken on the Youtube link, btw.

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Thanks. Fixed now. :twilightsmile:

prometedor, me gusta

Ooooh, TwiTavi. The premise actually reminds me a bit of Sonnets by Twilight, by Mr. Numbers. (No, I do not think there is any connection here, I am just noting a neat coincidence with another story I really enjoyed.)

It's a double bass! #rustledjimmies

:trollestia:

I gotta admit, dood. I literally jumped in without looking at the author, and then I saw the chapter breaks, dood. A fine work as usual, dood.

Mature + Sex tag, :pinkiehappy: + Anthro :twilightangry2:
Darn it Wrabbit, you were so close, then you veered off into left field :rainbowlaugh:.

Oh well, I'll catch your next one.:twilightsmile:

well well well...I cannot wait to see where this lovely thing goes.

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Muchas Gracias. :scootangel:
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I'm trying hard to avoid getting too similar to that story, but with a concept like this, some parallels will be inevitable. :twilightsheepish:
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Glad I was able to deliver a nice surprise to you. :pinkiehappy:
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::wipes away a tear:: That was beautiful. :twilightsmile:
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Aw, don't you even want to give it a shot? I promise there will be plenty of time to get used to that before the sex shows up. :unsuresweetie:
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Thank you kindly. :pinkiesmile:

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TwiTavi? Octilight? My friends, please, show a little imagination!

Obviously, the name we should use for this particular ship is "Octwivia."

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People, people, please. Let's not fight about this. Besides, the only real choice is obviously Twilody (or if you insist on using whole names, Twilight Melody). :derpytongue2:

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Well, that's... Hm. Twilody....

You may be right, at least for my limited expertise.

~You may be wrong, for all I know, but you may be right~

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It may just be a lunatic you're looking for.

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Let there be WAR!

Also TwiTavia is superior because of the feeling of alliteration.

Twilody on the other hand feels strange to say without changing the Twi to more of a Twil.

The work is worth the wait. Fantastic job.

Commence read.

Slightly thrown off by the power of Windsday.

And there goes Vinyl, being Vinyl.

the Fancy horn

For Celestia's sake, it's a French horn. Jesus, try to get it right. I play that.

Other that that, not bad. Have you read Steel Quill's stories? You compare quite well.

I'm mixed now for this story is head in love triangle, and very few people can ever pull off a love triangle as most make it seem unnecessary for a story.

5456498 I do think that 'fancy horn' was intentional. I thought the same as well when I came across vivid alder and shakey spear. Then it clicked.

Well, now I can see why you went with anthro on this. Saves you having to answer "How the fuck does she play the cello with hooves!?". Great as always so far, Wrabbit.

A little sad that it is not a Twu/tavi story but I am still enjoying the read very much. please keep it up!!

I finally got the time to hop on board with this story. I'm very pleased bu what I've seen so far and am looking forward to future chapters. I am pretty bummed to know that either Twilight or Scratch is going to be heart broken at the end of it most likely. i just hope you don't do what some writers do and make Vinyl into some kind of evil b!tch in the process. Although, I suppose it possible that in the long run all three could end up together. I'm also hoping this fic takes place over a longer time period and you don't hoop Twi up with some one that much older then her while she's so young.

Btw, nice Plain Sight addition.

Very nice story, it's nice to see the return of characters from your past stories return. Keep up the good work. :twilightsmile::yay:

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::shrugs:: I like it. :coolphoto:
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Too late. :pinkiehappy:
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Heh heh. :twistnerd:
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You are welcome. :eeyup:
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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:
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Windsday is only the beginning! Just wait until Satyrday! No, really, that's what I'm going with. :trollestia:
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Considering there is nor France in Equiis (and Prench sounds odd),I went with Fancy. :raritywink:
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I'll do my best. :twilightsheepish:
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I'm glad someone caught that Vivid Alder. Shaky Spear is kinda obvs, but not many know the great baroque composers these days. :ajsmug:
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That too. I hope the sex this chappie shows the main reason. :rainbowwild:
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Mmmaaayyybe. :pinkiecrazy:
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Patience, Grasshopper; patience. :coolphoto:
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Nah, Vinyl is much too laid back to be evil. Also, glad you liked Plain Sight's return. You're the first to mention her. :twilightblush:

Commence read.

For some reason I was expecting someone to catch Octavia and Vinyl.

Sadly Spike can't be confided in, it seems. Twilight still needing to work on the feelings.

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Am okay with this.

A great sigh escaped the filly as she stood and started carefully putting her books away into her bag properly. “I suppose I do. Thanks, Mrs. Nib. I've got to go, but I'll be back this Satyrday to see if the pen I ordered came in. Bye!”

Satyrday

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That.....that was good.

Oh Octy, you naughty girl you. :rainbowwild:

Conflict, I already thought you had set up conflict with the fact that Twilight was pining for Octavia and she was already in a relationship with Vinyl. Now your throwing this conflict at us, dear god this is going to be a cluster fuck......no pun intended.

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Them getting caught is not in the cards... yet. :trollestia:
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I'unno. Have you taken your meds? :ajsmug:
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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:
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:raritywink:
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It's always the repressed ones, huh? :rainbowwild:
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No cluster fuck; just the regular kind. :yay:

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Dun dun dunnnnnn. The suspense, at some possible point!

Commence read.

Like the banter with Ms.Crucible. Plus the science of it all.

And Moonday strikes the calendar.

Oh, the anticipation. But once it arrives I am certain it shall be worth it.

Awww, chapter went to fast. But I was very happy just to have the update! :twilightsmile:

5569166 What's a PCA? I searched it in Google and got several different acronyms.

5569855 ahh, I see:twilightsmile:

... I just had a mental image of Leonardo telling off some fillies and warning them about the dangers of bulling.

My sides exploded.

Very interesting =()

How old is Twilight here, again?

I need ages! I love this story but i'm constantly confused about how old everypony is.

I feel so bad for Twilight in this one, not only is her crush one sided, added that Octavia lardy has the DJ of her dreams, she is geeing so worked up over Honeyed Words knowing about her crush., :twilightoops:

5572662 Twilight is in a very bad way in this. I would pay good money to not be in her position.... except for maybe the female part. That sounds like an interesting change.

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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:
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Technically, it's alchemy, not science, but I like to give all my fantasy a touch of legitimacy. :twilightsheepish:
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Maybe even a guy in a horrible Whinny the Pooh costume could do a little song and dance? :rainbowderp:
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Sorry, I thought I was clear in the first chapter. Twilight's 13, while Octavia is 18. :twilightblush:
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C'est la vie. :unsuresweetie:

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I intend to, but I'm just taking a quick break to write this one-shot fic in which Twilight fucks... well, I won't spoil it for you. :trollestia:

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Actually, you were not, but I wanted to make sure.
Mainly because the anthro tag puts this story at high risk for being reported, if I understand the rules right. I might be wrong, and so, IGNORE ME. But I think underage sex is against site rules for both human AND anthro.
Ima go check.

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