The mane 6 are having a normal day then suddenly discord shows up and tricks them into falling into a trap that takes them to another universe of gravity falls! Now dipper, Mabel, soos, Stan, and Wendy must help them get home and try to avoid the new spins that discord has put upon the monsters of gravity falls! Will they make it out? Will they be trapped in gravity falls forever? Find out by reading this!
This is my first story so don't judge me if I do something wrong! I plan on making longer chapters later on!
Chapters (3)
It's a good idea for a crossover but my only problems are 1. Your not capitalizing the first word of a sentence when you start it. 2. A good strong first chapter should be longer than 300 or so words. 3. You really rushed it. I suggest to go to this group https://www.fimfiction.net/group/203549/supportive-commentary-club
Trust me it's a good story for your first but I suggest trying this group there helped me out of my writers slum for my first few story's and now they are up and running On the website.
I put emphasis on: This is my first story so don't judge me if I do something wrong!