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THE NARWHAL BACONS AT MIDNIGHT ಠ_ಠ
Do... I spy an Octavia and Coco Pommel story...?!
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Next featured story calling it now!
interesting ship.
A trigger warning for rape would've been nice!
First chapter, brilliant build up. Second chapter, WTF? Was all set to enjoy some consensual bdsm, then Coco begs not to be screwed with the toy so Octavia shoves it up her ass! You even have Octavia wonder about it as she 'anally rapes' her.
Great job making me feel disgusted
Nicely written power play.
I already have a boner
5399189 But your at the end of the fic. Fuck.
5399194 I have yet to begin reading. That was my going in comment.
5399202 Ah.
5399202 *snickers* 'Going in comment.'
*while reading the shower scene*
Why doesn't she want Octavia to see the final?
Wait... Is she...? Oooooooh... She is in the fashion show, right?
Your underthings, darling.
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And what the fuck, Octavia? You admit to being Coco's Waifu, recognize her as a contestant on a show you like, repeatedly admit you are attracted to her, start eating her out, and then you fucking leave as she is crying on the floor? What a fucking bitch. I'm killing you at the end of Cider Country now.
5399584 I hope you finish the fic. You might see a bit her point of view. Also, this was actually meant to be a part of a collab so there was supposed to be more then these two chapters to bookend their romance. Instead, I had to change the ending to the second chapter so I didn't have to get rid of half the work that had gone into it.
Two weeks? It's been two weeks since you left her sobbing on her kitchen floor?
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You whore!
Not yet? What the fuck are you going to do, you crazy bitch?
You are just making me hate you now.
Wow, a mare with no self-esteem paired up with an abusive bitch.
To be fair, I'd still stitch places with Coco.
Why would she need-? What the fuck are you going to do to her!?
...I see we've reached that point.
Do it, Coco! Fuck the bitch hard!
HOLY SHIT! WHAT THE FUCK?!
I actually said that out-loud. That caught me by surprise.
*reads rest of story and decides to not constantly quote it and make comment too long.*
What the fuck was that?
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You had a decent build up in the first chapter and I was even liking it right up until Octavia loses her fucking shit Twice! The first time was fine by me, but having her go full on Ilsa Nazi She-Wolf on Coco was simply too much!
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Yes Octavia, because Coco doesn't want to lose her virginity to your fucking murder dildo, it is perfectly okay to shove it up her ass. Anal rape! That's what friendship is made of!
This pairing is intriguing enough on it's own and the set up made me think it was going to be Coco learning to be more dominate. But fuck that, surprise rapey buttsex for everybody!
I don't know, I'm probably an asshole for freaking out like this, but maybe a warning in the description could have, say, warned me about that shit? Maybe!?
5399710 I don't know what to say. This was written for a shameless clop collab months, and I mean MONTHS, ago. I didn't mean for any rapey feels though to me it is hard to have BDSM stuff on someone who wasn't expecting it without some of those vibes. They were not meant and I did not mean to make Octavia appear as such a bitch. However, the biggest reason I have the trigger warning as it is is because this is old and neglected. I am sorry you dislike it so much, especially since they were for reasons that were not intended. *Jumbled walks off sad* At least this didn't do very well.
5399753 I was mostly just poking fun at Octavia, but I did actually lose my shit there at the end.
While not into BDSM, I don't hate it and I think I get the general idea behind it. And I love aggressive sex. It's in the top five best kinds of sex.
But it was Octavia's blatant disregard for Coco's well being and Coco's acceptance of the whole thing that really rubbed me the wrong way.
I honestly expected futa from the description. Not... this. You really need to change that. Maybe I'm alone on the rape feeling, but at least put a BDSM warning.
And I'm only now realizing I put comments when I meant description in my last comment.
5399787 I am starting to realize that. Honestly, from what I can remember (it has been months) Octavia left not because she was a bitch, but because Coco was crying from embarrassment. The two needed time to reevaluate what had just happened and been said. I understand if that is not how it came off.
As for the second half, I thought it would be fun making Tavi more like Vinyl, a twist to the old formula. So she lost herself to her lust and forgot the rules and what she should do. Again, I understand if you do not see it that way, but from what I can remember that was my reasoning.
Honestly, this really does suck because I feel love this couple. Like I said though, at least this isn't doing well.
5399809 I understand finding something you wrote a while ago and forgetting what you were doing. As for Coco crying from embarrassment? Yeah, that's believable. Octavia leaving because everything became too awkward? Totally get it. Octavia flirting with, admitting to being the object of her desire, licking her, and then leaving? That's where the bitch trend started. And believe me, I know the fun of characters being interpreted in a different way then you intended.
I'm 100% behind shaking up Octavia's character into a more aggressive mare. Oddly enough it's part of two fics I'm working on. And as for Octavia losing herself to lust... yeah, I'm doing that too....
Who is a giant hypocrite? I am!
I don't know. I just feel like it was taken too far. The narrative repeatedly states that Coco was finding very little pleasure in any of it. And then everything being okay at the end instead of Coco leaving a now heart-broken and disgusted with herself Octavia?
Ugh, I'm sorry. I really shouldn't be trying to rewrite anyone's stories, especially when I get all pissy about that myself.
This really could just be me. You do have a decent up/down ratio on this.
5399860 I doubt it is just you, but that it is written poorly/well enough to cause different interpretations. This is just how you see it and I can't entirely deny it because you do have a point. However, I am always a move forward type of author so I didn't quite scan this as much as I should and I'm happy it is being received as well as it is.
Octavia, you fucking bitch.
5399584 got the rest of it.
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I hope Octavia goes back and comforts Coco, because leaving her crying and doing nothing about it seems heartless to me.
Glad they got together, but I wish Octavia didn't let so much time pass before she invited Coco over to her house.