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[2nd-Pony][Short]
You work in the Ponyville Weather Control office, and on your rare day off, your hooves decide to take you to the library. There you come face-to-face with the unicorn you met in passing at her welcome party, Twilight Sparkle.
As you spend more and more time at the Ponyville Library, things between you two get... interesting...
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Noticed a couple past tense verbs here and there instead of present. Other than that, looks interesting and I'd like to see more!
I'm new here and I'm interested but busy, how do you set a fic to "read later"?
I'm new here and I'm interested but busy, how do you set a fic to "read later"? Wait, I'll just check the FAQ section!
521742 clicke the book next to the title, and if you wwant to keep track of it while its in progression, click the star next to the thumbs up/down bar
Not bad, a little short but most first chapters are.
Keep it up
ok, I have read two chapters of this story and I can safely say, I like it. I like it a lot!
PLease keep it up.
so,we meet again...cliff hanger!!!
...Is reading for four hours strait abnormal? I've read in excess of eight.
In any case, looking forward to more!
Sorry for some reason i just lost it at "pop a wingie." Brilliant story so far.
Nice!!!! I am loving this story
the only problem I see are that the chapters is to short!!!
please keep it up!
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Yeah, I'm having trouble getting beyond that 2,000 word mark right now. It's my first 2nd-"pony" fic, so I'm gonna go ahead and blame my lack of experience.
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its is good, thats why I was it was longer, so I can read more LOL
", and I'm here to return it.”
“And you're here to return it?” The dragon guesses,"
Uhh ... yeah spike good guess ... to think I'm there for the reason i said that i'm there for? ... who would have though?
EDIT: four hours straight is a lot? when i get a good book I'm reading it from 8:00 to 23:00 (that damn book had 2000 pages)
Its stories like this that make sifting through all the wierd stuff seem worth it, keep up the good work bro!
That was fun. I made myself facepalm an awful lot.
One bit jumped out at me, though: "hoof-five"? I know where you're coming from, but where would ponies get the "five" part from? Maybe "high-hoof" instead?
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Probably.
"diner on the edge town"
on the edge of town
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Whoops, typo. I think my mind was trying to convince me that there was such a town.
Moar?
Tommorow couldn't come at faster thats it this was a good story but that mean the towns exploding
four hours straight? jezze who'd read for that long?
Oh, is the sun rising, but i ust stared reading at midnight!
this. is. interesting, i'll be sure to follow your story.
Awesome chapter!
shes gonna take it the wrong way.
people who fucked up relationship due to mis understanding: too many
people who dont need a relationship: me
Wonder what spike will say when sees "you" in the bed
It's been awhile. That said, I really enjoyed the chapter and hope to see much. much more.
Hopefully quicker than three months.
Carry On
Been along time. I am glad this story is not dead.
and the warm ending to this chapter was just that warm and nice.
Good work
"As you spend more and more time at the Ponyville Library, things between you two get... interesting" Clopfic me thinks.
Who died?
Whether he knows it or not, this author knows how to treat his audience right, how to write a story we enjoy reading.
There is a reason it made the Featured Stories list, after all...
Seriously, great job! You've got me hooked!
I came for clop and I better get some
It seems as if this story is REALLY stereotypical. I mean you even added in dead-parents/brother/sister/relative. That being said, the writing is still good.
Not bad mate. I feel a touch rushed into his realization towards his "feelings" for Twilight, but I'm interested to see where this goes
Would you like a pre-reader? I'll admit it would be my first time, but I am picking up a lot of subtle mistakes here and there. Its a great little story so far, but when I see errors it kind of snaps me away from the story
2115833 I'm good for now. Thanks for the offer, though. I know I've got a lot of mistakes going on, I'm just not interested in a proofreader, to be honest. I'd rather just have the mistakes pointed out in the comments after and learn from my mistakes for the future.
do update when you can I do like this story
Sherhoof Holmes? Oh and might i recommend the hardy Colts, oh horse puns gotta love em.
And I wake up the next day spooning Twilight with two nasty cases of morning wood.
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I used to say that till I met my girlfriend. Turns out misunderstandings are less common and more forgivable if she's a DJing tomboy...
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee go dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yay!!!!!!! moar please =)
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She read for four hours?! That's nothing!
I've been on this site since yesterday! HA!
...I think I've said too much.
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I'm guessing one of his parents. I'm also guessing that their death is related to his fear of the Everfree.
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Muse Scroll. Y U NO UPDATE?!
That hiatus needs to go away... I need more chapters XP
This chapter was rather amusing i admit i kinda snickered at the stiff wing part
(i just cant type that word its weird for me)
The Fact That RD just put pressure on this guy makes it a bit unnerving
So is this ever going to be finished?
3472057 eh twilight and the others are i tight group for the one she threatens its nerve-recking yes but expected
Pretty nice to read. It's one of the better first person stories I've read.