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Pinkamena666


Just a dude who writes mainly clop with some action and some GrimDark on the side. Also, If you don’t like futa, you may have a bad time here :P ;)

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Now I want a sequel where they get back at Trixie.

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Your choice in pics never fails to make me laugh

Hmmm... ShimmerDash? Interesting.
The romance part kind of felt like it went too fast. I could see Sunset crushing on Dash that quickly, but Rainbow probably would have taken longer than a day or two.
Maybe that's just me. Anyways, other than that, this was alright.

i approve of this... greatly approve.

I hate to be "that girl" but it is "principal". Principle is the point or reason behind something. Or something like that. Very nice otherwise, but I find Sunset to be a bit too shy. I understand where it goes but, even Sunset would stand up for herself, no matter how big of a mistake she made.

Is this story being discontinued? I really loved the romance between Sunset and Dash! And the part where they raped Trixie... all the good stuff :twilightsmile:.

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Next chapter should be up within the next 3 days. Maybe 2. So, be ready ^_^

The light orange girl

The yellow girl

The orange-ish girl

Please make your mind up. This is very distracting.

Another thing. Do you have any idea what a real Master / Pet relationship actually is? Because, reading this, I don't think you do. There was no love or care shown between Rainbow and Trixie, or Sunset and Trixie. There was no safe word offered, just rape and abuse.

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Story just started and they're only high school kids. Give em time.

Also what color would you say sunset is?

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https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/cc/ee/1b/ccee1b3838c64df8fd280d0ccc6c78db.jpg - i'd say Sunset was straw yellow, going by this chart.

And, as a real life pet, if you need any help, don't hesitate to ask :twilightsmile:

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I did envision a scene with all three kneeling on the floor, Sunset and Trixie kissing while Dash kissed Trixie's back. But sure if you wanna help feel free to PM me ^_^

sliding her fingers into the mare's panties

Trixie bit her lips as she eyed the mare's breast,

It's EG universe, so why you using "mare"? Shouldn't be girl?

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS SUCH A PORN MOMENT I SWEAR

DAM!!!! left her hot and bother.

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