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KatPocketMonster


I'm an 24 yr old Aussie Pegasister who loves to play video games, drawing, reading and caring for animals!

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There are three steps on how to win a Princess's heart and the Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony, Discord, is there to prove it! Follow Discord as he tries to win The Co-ruler of Equestria, Princess Celestia's, heart!

Lets just hope Celestia is in a "loving" mood. :trollestia:

This is a Short Story and each Chapter will have a cover image. If you're goina dislike my story please let me know whats wrong, so I can fix it.
Looking for proof readers and editors or any help is very much appreciated! :twilightsmile:

EDIT: Now entered in the ~The Decent Writers Club~ Shipping Contest! :pinkiehappy: Fingers Hooves crossed!
WARNING this is my first romance story! Read at your own risk!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 26 )

Good start to your story! Can't wait for more!

Just a tip about the title, the correct way to write "Princesses" as "Belonging to a princess" is "Princess's". It has a possessive apostrophe.

He should have tried the Pepe Le Pew strategy.

I'm writing a Dislestia fic too, but I'm skipping straight to the wedding! Feel free to check it out.

Comment posted by KatPocketMonster deleted Dec 15th, 2014

Why'd you delete your reply? Anyway, if you do read my story, be sure to leave a comment. Just to let you know, the story is called "Wedding of the Millennium".

interesting idea for a story. I do wonder if Celestia will catch on that Discord has a crush on her. I guess we will find out soon enough.

5393171 I'm surprised Celestaia didn't see it at step 2. Especially with the poem named "Secret Admirer"

Also I could help edit, but I suck at it. :P

5393201 She wasn't paying attention. I think what would be ironic would be after the last step, Celestia still doesn't notice so Discord starts hanging out with Fluttershy. After Luna confronts Celestia about Discord, Celestia realizes that she has feelings for him. So she reads how to win a colt's heart in three easy steps and tries them on Discord.

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Believe me, that wont happen but it'll be amusing if somepony did :rainbowlaugh:

Boutique is actually supposed to be bouquet.

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thnx :twilightsmile: I've been working on my grammer and such, still isn't perfect but it's a lot better than before :twilightsheepish:

aaawww
so cute that ending :3
i really did enjoy this story :D
i would love to read a sequel ^^

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so glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:
I shall think about a sequel in the future

For me this is just a huge reference to Q and Janeway in 'The Q and the Grey' from Star Trek: Voyager, I love this fic! :heart:

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