The Crimson Grasshopper

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More agile than a turtle. Stronger than a mouse. More noble than a lettuce. His emblem is a heart.
He is... The Crimson Grasshopper!

In the quiet town of Ponyville a new hero appears to make the already safe town even more safe.

Proofreader/Editor: Rocinante

(In the loving memory of Roberto Gomez Bolaños. The original Crimson Grasshopper.)

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Acacia Sgt

Acacia Sgt #1 · Dec 6th, 2014 · · ·

OMG, YES, ¡el Chapulin Colorado!

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This is promisingly great... even if it's not the same in English. Oh well, heh.

*Sigh* Too bad about Chespirito, though... Well, it was only a matter of time considering his health condition, but still...

Voltaje

Voltaje #2 · Dec 6th, 2014 · · ·

Fuck great¡¡¡ I was just thinking about a couple of stories involving The Crimson Grasshopper, El Chavo and Chaparron Bonaparte, but I can't write, then you come and all is good again :), Thanks for the story, I'm following.

Hidden Scorpius XI

Hidden Scorpius XI #3 · Dec 7th, 2014 · · ·

Let me give you a suggestion: Profread the story you too. It has many glaring errors in grammar, format and even sequence.
This is not a hate comment, it's an advice. I also enjoyed this show when I was a kid and I would love to read this story, but these issues are just too much of a problem

Nesfex

Nesfex #4 · Dec 7th, 2014 · · ·

5353393 Thank you. I will surely give it a second look and the following chapters

Nesfex

Nesfex #5 · Dec 7th, 2014 · · ·

5349913 i know about the english, but if I wrote it in spanish it was most likely to be toss aside. Im so glad you like it

Nesfex

Nesfex #6 · Dec 7th, 2014 · · ·

5350096 No, thank you. And don't say you can't write. Every writer started somewhere. You just have to try, even if it doesn't comes out like you hoped at first. I'll keep an eye on you too, i want to read whatever you come up with