Applebloom makes a terrifying descovery that she is pregnant. How will she tell her family and friends about it? And, what will she do?
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Apple Bloom is pregnant when she is just a filly O_O well that not good at all and it is going to change Apple Bloom and Spike life forever plus a lot of other stuff
WOAH.
I love how they reacted. (Sweetie!) Apple Bloom WHY?
Wait, not aged up?
That reaction and how everything panned was amazing. I was actually scared to read this at first (seeing how it looked like it'll turn out. Ya know-crack fic) but I was really happy I had. It was great, especially how everyone reacted. (Sweetie reminds me of that one character in every story) I love the dialogue as well. I seriously can't wait to see Spike's reaction and multiple pairings.
4328708 Fillies these days, am i right?
4328749 Indeed
Overall, I like how this story has begun. Although, it started off a little fast, and the dialogue exchanges were a little hard to focus on with the missing punctuations and such.
However, you get an upvote from me, but might I suggest getting an editor to help you with those errors? I'll gladly offer my assistance, if you wish.
4328766 yeah you are right
4328765 I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile. The story won't be very long, but I hope you like what I have planned
4328797 I'm sure I'll like it!
4328772 Yeah, I don't have prereaders nor editors. And well... English isn't really my first language
But I'll try harder to make it better 
Thanks
O_o
I'm intrigued. Do continue.
Interesting opener. First chapter is a little short but doesn't feel too rushed, even if everyone seems rather calm given the earth shattering revelation. I have a couple of theories on where this could be going already, most of which would eventually merit a comedy tag along with SOL. Either way, you have my attention.
Interesting idea. It's not terrible, but you're missing punctuation marks on almost every quotation. Also, at one point you put "Sweetie Belle y Scootaloo." Haha, Spanish much?
4329148 Well, that was embarrassing
Yeah, I'm not really used to write stories in English, but I'm doing my best.
4329142 I think you will find the ending, interesting
Good story, have a thumbs up and a smile
also 
I like where this is headed!
Although, I would definitely agree with taking up 'Dont Look At My Name Bro' 's offer to grab an editor. He's a part of the editing group "The Proofreader Group", and it's probable that you're only a single time zone apart. Here is a link to his profile.
Good luck with your writing!
Thumb up and follow.
4329188 That's fine. You'll get better with practice.
Interesting story.
Keep it up.
MOAR!
Really, Spike? I expected you to be more responsible than this.
Oh fanfiction, what would I do without you?
Interesting, I like the approach of starting the story as late as you did.
It's a bit wooden in places. Might even call it surreal at times.
I'm faving to see where you take this. Pleas ask yourself the "Why" behind how ponies react to her being pregnant. Why would AJ be mad? Because AB was reckless and engaged in unprotected sex, or because she broke a social taboo? Those are very different. One is "I taught you better, condoms are cheap, you're too young to get pregnant," because it might be dangerous to her health. The other is shame based. Then you have to ask where did the shame come from? Shoving western morality onto ponies without context is lazy.
Keep writing, looking forward ti the next chapter.
Excellent start
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I shall keep an eye on this story.
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In his defense, there's no logical way a reptile and mammal should be able to reproduce together.
He just didn't realize how magic beats logic over the head with a crowbar and leaves it bleeding in the moonlight.
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"There's no logical explanation for this! It's just not possible!" said the fire breathing dragon taking another bite out of a perfect sapphire.
Just thought of something, how do we really know she is prego. I mean since their age isn't said in the story I can only assume they are still young so for all we know they kissed or coped a field off each other and now she thinks she is prego. I mean we don't know any details (and not not that kind of details lol
) As we said we have to wait and see when she tells Spike and the family.
Well, Scootaloo that is a good question to be asking... Although she could probably make a pregnancy test potion with her alchemy training. It would be interesting if they had a stasis spell for unborn fetuses, so she could grow up and then have it years later. A little too Deus ex machina though so there would be no point to the story.
hmmmm...you have caught me attention.
I'm always on the look out for more Spike/Apple bloom ships, I will see how this develops before I say anything more.
Foalcon pregnancy?
I like this.
4329188 For writing a story this popular in a language you weren't born into, you did pretty freakin' amazing. good work
4329938 Well-its all magic. I mean:how many times have there been cases where dragons and Ponies could have children? I mean-they are two very different species.
Where's the multiple thumbs up button when you need it??!!!!!
Never thought to ship it......till now.
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I wasn't talking about genetic compitability. I meant that I expected Spike to realize that they were a bit young for a sexual relationship in the first place and that they probably shouldn't rush into things. I mean, they apparently weren't even openly dating. Unless Apple Bloom was really insistant and very convincing, I'm just not sure I see him sleeping with such a young filly.
And besides, the fact that they probably didn't know wether or not this could happen is just another reason to be careful. Unlike us, they live in a world were nonsensical things happen all the time.
4332068 Well I always figured he was younger than his actual age. I mean-he's a baby dragon. I just figure he's her age mentally. Thats why he's still a chilf in the adults' eyes.Plus- even in their world, its unknown. (Sweetie says this before she gets hit)
4332611 Thats actually just about correct. Remember, twilight hatched him when she was a filly so he is at most about 5 to 8 years younger than her.
4332627 But he also doesn't grow much. Greed makes them grow faster. Dragon's are greedy. But would this halt things if he wasn't greedy? Thats why I'm assuming he's even younger than estimated-mentally anyway.
4332689 Not really, it is the size of their hoard that makes them grow, a greed growth is when they start their hoard and don't stop collecting, thus becoming a feral dragon. If he were to have build his hoard up at a steady pace from when he was even younger then he should technically be the same size as garble and of somewhat similar mentality, which he has. Spike does think like a teenager but only as one of younger age than say a 16 year old, spike would most likely be around 13 or 14 in age while twilight is about 18 to 19.
4332784 I don't know if she even if 19. We don't really know any age. Heck, it seems like they are aged (still foalcon however) up in this anyway. (Being that Scootaloo effectively hit Sweetie when her wings are not that big in canon.) I doubt that she would be able to conceive if she wasn't older than her age. (Though-it would be odd since none have their cutie marks yet)Or, better yet, sustain it because it would effectively kill her. Of course-the exception is still there (Dr.Phil showed a pregnant 11 year old) but AB's older (unless you discredit Equestria Girls) than that.
Then again, I really doubt that Spike has a horde of anything. If he was, then he wasn't trained how to control it properly, which again shows that he probably didn't build to be where he is at.
Spike finally got laid! Hell yeah!!!
4329188 You speak spanish?
What the...I...you have my attention I think
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And that´s why society must put sex education in the schools.
HEY WAIT WHAT.
She's too young. Too freakin' young, man.
There are some places even I dare not tread, and fillies getting pregnant is one of those places.
You won't get a downvote from me because I use the thumbs system for its intended purpose--that is, to critique based on how a story is written, not what a story is about--but I very strongly dislike your story premise.
Why couldn't you have told the same story with an older pony? Maybe I'd have wanted to read it then. 
4333277 True.