Lemon Glaze, a local Ponyville citizen, has gathered information on a certain plant that will help her made a beautiful new glaze... However she has to enter the Everfree forest to retrieve it, and she'll meet an interesting stallion within.
While I'm usually not one for vore (excluding "Panzer Vor!" exclamations as appropriate), I most enjoyed even that, yet alone the parts I came for. I can't tell why there's so many dislikes.
5428843 Some bronies simply dislike because of the sex tag, other because of snakes, maybe one didn't enjoy my work, who knows. I'm just glad more people enjoyed than didn't.
5460766 I'll try but my brain is hard-wired to know what it should say, which doesn't mean its always right, sorry! XD But I'll have a read through after the next chapter is done.
5403667 Sorry about that I'll try to fix it in proof reading, thanks. :)
5404759 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, working on more! :)
I came for the vore and stayed for the romance. Not bad.
While I'm usually not one for vore (excluding "Panzer Vor!" exclamations as appropriate), I most enjoyed even that, yet alone the parts I came for. I can't tell why there's so many dislikes.
5428843 Some bronies simply dislike because of the sex tag, other because of snakes, maybe one didn't enjoy my work, who knows. I'm just glad more people enjoyed than didn't.
Oh and thanks! :)
5428764 XD Thanks.
i usually like stories with sex or fetish's (like vore) when theres more of a story behind them.
this is one of those stories and it's very amazing.
5429878 Thank you!
5429740 It's still equal to or better than other stories in the genre, which is the part that I don't get...
Edit: It's improved from what it was the first time I read it to a comparable rating to most stories of the sort.
5432684 Thanks, and don't worry about other peoples views everyone welcome to them.
5461530 It was a roleplay so it jumped quickly from what we wanted to do. :)
5460766 I'll try but my brain is hard-wired to know what it should say, which doesn't mean its always right, sorry! XD But I'll have a read through after the next chapter is done.
Moar.
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That's all I have to say.
5475658 Thanks, glad you like it and soon, just want to get some work on my other book I'm doing.