Lemon Glaze, a local Ponyville citizen, has gathered information on a certain plant that will help her made a beautiful new glaze... However she has to enter the Everfree forest to retrieve it, and she'll meet an interesting stallion within.
“Sweet dreams.” Lemon thought wrapping his tongue around Lemon’s.
The first Lemon should be Pine.
She was going to push him off, but she herself couldn’t deny that her new friend was an amazing kisser.
You don't need the herself.
“What Lemon? they’re just plants.” Pine said sliding besides her again; she looked like she’d seen a ghost.
You need a question mark right there.
And yes, i know the story is old, but it's never to late to improve.
The first Lemon should be Pine.
You don't need the herself.
You need a question mark right there.
And yes, i know the story is old, but it's never to late to improve.