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Foals Errand


Guess whose back?!

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This story is a sequel to Tainted Love: A Twysalis Prompt Tag Collab


What happens when Queen Chrysalis awakens as a unicorn next to her wife Twilight Sparkle? Nothing good, that's for sure! Join our heroes Twilight Sparkle, and Queen Chrysalis they travel Equestria to put back what once went wrong.
One hundred percent guaranteed to make little to no sense.
A One shot from the same authors that brought you Tainted Love.

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Oh sweet Celestia, what have we done? A bit confused as to why this isn't in the prompt collab itself, along with the 50th special, though.

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At over 10,000 words I felt it a better idea to make it a one shot all on its own. Maybe not the best idea but eh to late to change my mind...

5338065 Maybe a link from the collab?

Oh lord, I'd forgotten about this...

The insanity, the insanity...

“The last remaining puzzle in my mind,” Celestia said, raising a hoof to chin in thought. “Is how did things get so out of control in the first place?” Trollestia looked to the viewers and raised her right eyebrow disapprovingly.

“Bad fan fiction writers!” She hissed.

:rainbowlaugh:

That was good one, could be longer without deus ex machina.

and you know worldwide kilometers are way more used than miles

5338523 It could have, but it was getting absolutely ridiculous on the thread, to the point where TheMusicalBoy said 'Screw it! Just end the insanity!'

5338461 I did it. And I am proud!!!

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it wasn't that ridiculous yet, you know it wasn't even on level of fic called 'fluttershy loves minigun'(literaly) or something like that

Congrats on getting this far! Keep up the good work (especially for the happy/sweet chapters)!

The title alone has, like, two errors in it.

Not to be a buzzkill or anything.

5342295 Yep. The Twysalis prompt 100 special was that one author would write a part of a story, then someone else would continue it, then someone else, then someone else, etc. Things got silly very fast.

5342295
I daresay this is the true equivalent, however.
Fimfiction Writes Ponies!

Similar idea, much different outcome.

I remember this insanity, "The Madness" (which is what it got renamed to somewhere along the way) along with the other very many names that it was referred to as. It was a lot of fun to write even though it was derailed at almost every new submission.

My sole complaint: there was almost no ChrysaLight... err, Twysalis in this. They were there, but that was about it.

WHERE IS THE CARAPACE-CUDDLING?
WHERE IS THE HOLE-HUGGING?
WHERE IS THE (sorry, anonymoose) PEDIPALP-PETTING?

5338523 In England and the rest of Britain, our road signs use miles, not sure where the kilometer thing came from.
Good 100th special guys, though it could have done with more true Twysalis action

5389580 Doesn't mean we don't use miles, but metric makes sense, since it's used in SI (Scientific measurements)

5389580 I'm American, and even I don't really understand what a mile is.

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Eh, why's that matter? A mile is slightly bigger than wutever a kilometer is. It's also a fun thing to concoct with. But, that depends on wut you actually do with it, I guess.…

Why the regret? The clashing clichés make a truly fabulous, positively awesome, not to mention hilariously fascinating, Fimfic. Please explain the 'reason' behind which you hide in order that you may have the ability to justify your unfounded regret, If you would. Thank you for any response you might give.

That was hilarious :rainbowlaugh: I just have no words on how entertaining this was :facehoof: Nicely done :twilightsmile:

Lel. That was hilarious. A pity that the part with Sombra and Cadance got erased too.

very funny, it made me smile....

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