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TheDeprecated


This is where I place my MLP fanfics.

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A short little fic regarding Twilight and the importance getting enough sleep. Twilight gets no sleep then overreacts accordingly.

Celestial intervention may be necessary.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Very nice! :twilightsmile:

I would not say that this story requires lengthening, but I do require more stories from you! :twilightblush:

I really love these kind of Celestia and Twilight stories

The Luna bits confused me. When is this taking place?

I would definitely look forward to more of this fic.

Comment posted by TheDeprecated deleted Mar 2nd, 2015

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The show is really vague about this. I figured that Twilight knew about Princess Luna because she had to have read about the rise of Nightmare Moon at some point before the show starts and known that Celestia had a sister who ruled with her, and I don't put Celestia as the type to try and forget her sister. This takes place before Luna's return, when Twilight is still super bookish and anti-social.
I originally intended to write out all of the periods, but I couldn't think of a way to write a substantial and fulfilling amount for each chapter, so I cut it. I'll edit the description since it's misleading.

Edit: Deleted my own derp comment

The cellular production of energy being used to produce magic is a neat idea. Especially the magippendix as there is no method for creatures, known to humans, to store excess ATP. Alicorns and powerful unicorns must have large magippendix to store the ATP needed to perform powerful spells, i.e.: moving the sun/moon and teleporting.

I give you a like, a fav, and :twilightsmile:.

this story was fun :scootangel:

Nice little story and believable characterisation. Celestia can recognize the signs of sleep deprivation in her student because Twilight keeps studying until she passes out.

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