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After her safe return, Princess Cadence is having dinner with those who saved her, Sherlock Hooves and John Trotson. Joining them is her husband and her sister-in-law, Twilight.
It was during this dinner, that Sherlock has deduced before their very eyes, something that Twilight has kept hidden.
Her special somepony.
A special thanks to SecretBrony01 for proofreading.
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well at least you didn't go the oh so over tread sibling incest route that everyone always uses, which includes other fandoms, always creeped me out.
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You sir, when I finished this, took the words right out of my mouth.
The nickname is Twiley.
This sounds like the sequel to something. Is it a sequel to something? If it is then you should really say what the previous story is...
you should write a Sequel about the Dark Day Cadance speaks of
i may be showing my age but I am going to put this out there anyway.
and (have) been (returned back) safely
The first set of ( ) I think we can all agree should be [has] the second set is something I have seen in way to many stories. My old English teacher would have chewed on me like a rawhide toy with a large redundant on the paper, [Returned] means to bring something back to it original place. To bring something [back] means the same thing.
Unless things have changed drastically you are saying the same thing twice. Please do not think of this as something only you have been doing it is just that as Popeye would have said. “I've had all I can stands an I can't stands no more.” Everyone seems to be doing the same thing.
OK rant over. Good story really like the ending I totally agree with xanderfox.
Well written and although I usually HATE gay-fics I have to admit this was a good story.
5310187 Then don't.
i'm not quite sure how to respond to this story in general. especially given the fact that it's canon that twilight is not immortal.
Dammit, Sherlock. XD
I always liked this angle as it always made for interesting drama. That being said i feel like the ending was more than a little rushed. It just sorta went from that detailed deduction to the end. I wanted to read more honestly. But that said. We need more Twi-Dance so thumbs will come your way.
There's too little Twidance on this site as is. We need more.
cute
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IS it?