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Anima Reaper


I'm just here so I don't get fined

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Interesting it sounds like its gonna be a horror story....

5364438 eh i wouldn't really call it a horror story

I just have to say that I have seen this animation during the beginning of my school semester and to me it was the most disturbing animations ever made. But I'm sure there are more disturbing ones.

5364751 you want me to send you some?

5364812 alright give me a sec

I was personally introduced to The Backwater Gospel upon finding this song awhile back.

I quite enjoy this retelling with ponies already.

5364933 that actually how i found it to then i found the animation and thought what the hell lets put some ponies in there

I think you did a big mistake realising this ¿chapter? Alone, because is practicaly the animation only with some pony names . this could be good but try to have something el se if you base your work in others work

5365327 yes i know my mistakes i expected this when i posted it but to tell the truth i couldn't really change much with the first chapter i know it can be done but just not by me the second chapter is gonna be more my work then the animation's work and if it isn't then report me or something idc but im still glad you read it

5365341 do not worry. making something new with the story of others is exactly a fan fiction
And o my gosh we are in a fan fiction site

5365507 oh my god :pinkiegasp: when did this happen

Apostrophe then s is never used to pluralize a word! Your goddamn title contains a grammar error!

How do you people function with such horrendous ignorance!?

5373348 because we like to butcher the english grammars

I haven't even read the fic yet and I know it's gonna be awesome. I loved the Backwater Gospel, and I'm sure I'll love this.

5387622 thanks i hope you enjoy

Father, Sombra stood in his church, alone, staring out the dusty, old window, his bible in hand.

lose the coma

"Good morning," father Bulk Biceps said as he entered through the church doors. "I hope I'm not interrupting you," father Bulk said as he walked to the back of the church.

Is Bulk the priest or Sombra? (move first father inside the quotations and possibly drop the second)

It is said that in the city of Sikkim, every stallion was punished for the sins of one man. Sombra shouting at the crowd and all their attention was focused on him. His face grew dark and his voice grew cold and the punishment was death. The crowd looked up at Sombra, each one had a scared look in their eyes. Fluttershy had pulled the hair in front of her face and Applejack seemed to be trying to hide in her cowboy hat.

missed some quotation marks
other than that, good job. Can't wait to see more

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