Not ten years.
Not one hundred years.
Not one thousand years.
One million years.
An amount of time so ridiculously long, Celestia knew she would never see her beloved sister again. In fact, would Equestria even exist by that time? Would anything of the world she once knew remain? Why, oh why, did those Elements have such a terrible price?
Moping around in the library became Celestia's way to cope. Never really reading, simply grazing.
But one day, she stumbles upon a book that could change Luna's fate.
All it requires is sending Luna vivid stories, all comprised of cherished memories from their foalhood.
The catch? Luna must read them and write back, or the spell will not work. How would Celestia be able to convince whoever her sister had become to even open the letters?
Ooo.... I like this story!
I love this story
I really like this story hope to read more soon
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Thank you, all THREE of the ponies who commented!
THREE! That's such a cool number! It's half of the smallest perfect number other than zero!
Wait, what was I doing? Oh, yeah! If any of you have any idea at all for a letter, I beg of you to tell me! I'm starting to run out of ideas! If I've already done or am doing something similar, I'll tell you.
Also, the next chapter will come out tomorrow.
5308194 maybe where Lulu got sick and Tia just decided to help her herself instead of telling the guards to
5308238 Ooh, sounds cool! I'll start playing around with that in my head!
5308318 glad I could help
you put down in one of the chapters that luna had a thing for discord how about making a story about a first date of hers with him and if it goes well then go on form here till he goes bad. or a heats worming one
5308340 THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEAN.
SHE'S A LITTLE FILLY, DUDE. SHE THINKS OF HIM LIKE THE COOL UNCLE THAT PULLS QUARTERS OUT OF YOUR EARS.
I don't really do anything that has to do with romance, anyways. But thanks for trying to contribute!
5308359 SORRY but what about heats worming it is there Christmas
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Yay!
5309111 Oh. Hmmm...
HMMMMMMM...
HMHMHMHMHMHMHMHMHMHMHMMMMMMMMMMMMM...
We'll see.
5309311 okay
Good story so far
I'd love to see something like "remember when you accidentally destroyed a small town" or "accidentally set the palace on fire"... Those are bit destructive... Maybe a surprise birthday party that went wrong or something. Just some ideas
5320321 Great, now the next chapter is going to be called "Remember When You Burnt Our House Down?" all because of YOU! Or... second-next. I think.
5320359 yay! Cool! I look forward to it
I don't hate you. In fact, I like the premise. Also, is this the first time Celestia banished Luna to the moon?
try recounting the story of the crystal empire
seeing as celestias older you can have her taking care of baby luna
try writing about maybe her becoming princesses, or the first times they raised there celestial body
maybee the first loves they had or their first hearths warming
5320773 Yes, it is. Should I try to clarify that in the author's notes?
that right there was my favorite scene during this chapter, i don't know why but i could perfectly see young Celestia whining like that
continue the good work great story and chapter
No problem
i see nothing wrong
and as frightning as that may make you i assure you im a certified non certified editor
this stroy is good and makes me feel good reading it
continue because of reasons
5427834 A certified non-certified editor?! That's about as official as it gets!
But, to be honest, I'm hoping for a Rage Review of this for the following reasons:
1. More often than not, Rage Reviews are hilarious and have hilarious captions.
2. This story will get more attention! Yay, attention!
It'll probably be negative attention, but who cares?
3. I'll know what to fix and stuffzes.
4. Smoked Gouda cheese.
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youll have to try making this story suck and that seems a bit hard even if i tried to write this
what im trying to say is your executing the premise greatly and seeing as how the time period is differnt from the show you can show leniency towards any characters personality thus it would be really hard for anyone to call someone OOC.
during the last chapter near the end when starswirl enters the picture it became a little hard to read and i was mismatching characters to their lines. i cant tell you how to fix things but i can tell you whats wrong from a simple minded persons perspective.
other than that i cant spot anything wrong.
seeing as how its troubling you ill start giving brief reviews of what i think after every chapter
im not that experianced but ill be glad to help
5428072 Works for me! I'll take a look at the Starswirl scenes to see if I can spot anything that's wrong.
I'mhere! Are you writing it anymore?
5533001 A little, yes. Who are you?
5536880 Yay!
I am a person that read your story. You can call me Dolly, if you want.
5537007 I see, I see. Well, if you'd like to help or something, I'd be totally grateful.
5537284 Help with what?
5537310 Write it. I'm kind of a total mess: I can rarely focus for more than a couple hundred words before doing something else.
5537318 Heh, I'm not much better. I have a few stories, but they each took me a bajillion years to write... and I'm really tired and have a bunch of homework right now, so I don't think I can.
5537333 Mkay. Well, thanks for... uh... existing, I guess?
5537369 I usually say "considering."
Luna XD
This is already looking interesting, too bad it's on hiatus. But that won't stop me from reading it. I can't wait to read the next chapter with Tia's first letter!
This has become a favorite of mine! Too bad you haven't been on for over two years... I seriously doubt this will ever continue.