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Cheesey Microwave
The greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing people he didn't exist. The second greatest was convincing people that MLP is for little girls only.
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I want to up vote it on sheer quality, even if I'm disturbed and repulsed by the horror of the encounter...which I guess was the point and bespeaks the writing prowess of the author...but I think it does need a horror tag in the description as a warning. Maybe I'm sensitive or something but the description of the suit's effects is some scary shit.
I just like how the Mane 6 are barred FOREVER! From the Grand Gallloping Gala, even Fluttershy. Especially Fluttershy. And that Luna wanted Discord invited but expects him to eventually kill everybody.
5157917 I think you're just really, really, REALLY sensitive. This ain't nothin' compared to Cupcakes or The Russian Sleep Experiment or some other decent quality pasta.
Mmm... cupcakes...
Well then!
Cheesey, I am now convinced that you do this narrative voice a lot better than the other examples I've seen from you. You have a sense of getting into the reader's head when your narration is free to do so. It's genuinely a bit creepy, even for this hardened soul.
I hope you continue to play to this strength and use the surroundings and latent features of your story setting to set the audience's mind aflame. Don't be shy. Make them question everything.
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Mahayro...
I love you in a totally platonic way.