Changeling Queen Twilight Sparkle was resting after the trying and costly adventure to Rookhaven when a magical event causes the last thing she ever expected. And alicorn Twilight Sparkle.
Spin off The Hive series by Law Abiding Pony
Edited by ThePrinceoftheNorth and Edguy0009
MOAR!!!!!
Awesome!
I cannot resist:
5254146 well if you have read the Hive series Queen Twilight has not been a bad thing.
Sweet Celestia!
Calm down Twi-
What the hay is goi.....oh.
Crystalia.....we may have a problem here.
Ya think?
5254261 Lol, and this is BEFORE the Luna or AJ find out.
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No, that was Twilight and Crystalia, one of my Changeling Queen OCs, reacting to the story.
5254314 oh. This story is still in brainstorm mode and your Queen MIGHT get in if you didn't mind.
Much interesting.
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Not at all. I'd love is Queen Crystalia had a part to play. Just read The Promise first, though. It give details about her appearance and relationships....lots of relationships....
However, I would humbly request that I be given the opportunity to be sure she stays in character before a chapter involving her is published. You might also consider her daughter and sister, who I can elaborate on, but would instead direct you to Something Remembered and Once Upon a December for reference.
5254433 sure thing.
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If you have any questions about Crystalia, Crystal Shimmer, or Fate, feel free to ask.
5254482 will read before asking.
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Keep me posted via PM.
Well well this is already gonna be a good story I see. I wonder how Princess Twilight will react to Queen Rainbow Dash ?
5268806 Not just Rainbow Dash
5268855 Indeed there's also her own Queen counterpart and various others.
Hahaha, I can see this getting interesting. I hope to see another update soon.
NOOO!!! I need more of this!!!
5271192 there is more. but this will be slow going
I await for this story to advance
If you're looking for an editor still, I'd be glad to take the challenge.
5287288 there's one guy ahead of you on the waiting list.
5287306 Alright, fine by me.
You need to post more chapters already. THE TENSION IS KILLING ME!
5332259 blame Derpy, she crashed through the script
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DAMN IT DERPY!
And I was practicing my lines! Hmph.
See? You made Crystalia sad!
5332321 well next up is an adorkable filly. then I'll get to the next chapter of this, barring Derpy
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What do you mean? Wait, you're not saying that Twi turns herself into a filly, are you?
5332364 Read Flare of the Twilight
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Say no more.
But when do my daughter and I come in?
That is....a very good question....and one best discussed over PMs.
Need an editor?
5349138 already have one
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Oh? Then why aren't either of the chapters edited yet? I'd have done it by now, heck, I'd have finished a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....
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5349941 I don't think my current editor has them to be honest.
5349970
Then he's not editing anything, now, is he?
5350018 he has the last Flare of Twilight and Girl From Equestria chapters.
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Well, regardless, if you wanted this edited, let me know.
5350176 I wouldn't be against it. and what's on here is what I have so if you want to go ahead.
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Okay! How do I do that.
5350354 copy pastes the written area and there is a download feature on this site. I'll PM my email address to you ccan sned the update
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I don't use my e-mail on my home computer. Tends to corrupt attached files. I'll send the revisions via PM.
5350551 okay
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However, it's almost a quarter after 1:00 am, so I'm pretty much done for tonight.
5350563 the husband of NMM going to bed while the moon is out
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Hey, I have some pretty strange bedtime habits to compensate for it!
I'm fine with it. Even I sleep at night.
5350606 Moonie, a bet it's with a plushie of Tia
5350626
No, it's not. I don't have any plushies.
5353012 then what's that on your bed?
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Pillows, a quilt, sheets, a matress, the bedframe. All generic.