This story is a sequel to A Queen's Perspective - Friendship Games
A few days after the Friendship Games, Rainbow Dash falls mysteriously ill. With human medicine unable to provide answers, Sunset Shimmer turns to the magic of her homeworld in hopes of finding the cause for the mysterious affliction.
Set in the continuity of law abiding pony's Hive series, running paralell to certain events of For the Hive
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Good though I was kinda expecting a bit more of world building but oh well, can't wait for how things will go with what's coming their way from both ends.
What a way to explain to us how (Equestria) Rainbow became royalty, great job!
Cargo.
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Pardon?
Human Rainbow: Wait! Does this mean my counterpart will have kids soon?!
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I'm fairly certain she didn't actually think that far ahead. Pretty sure she's still stuck on what Queen Twilight and currently Princess soon to be Queen Rainbow considering eachother sisters means for her and the Twilight of this world.
great job.
Honestly, I am not really a fan of the one-shots like this. You have a very confusing story where not a lot of people could follow unless they would read previous stories in order. (This story forces people to go back and read them anyway; but why bother?)
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It is not confusing in and of itself. Just as FiM didn't start when the mane six were born so too does this story set in a specific period of time. The assumptions it runs on are just different. Everyone is properly warned that this is a story set in a specific verse and thus the assumptions that FiM would be slightly off (incidentally i have trouble these days remembering that Twilight actually is a pony; most fictions i read about her contain Queen Twilight in my head unless plot requires pony anatomy. You must understand that changeling Twilight has been used so much).
I would of liked more; double word count should do.