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The past hurts, and no one would deny that. Everypony has a downside in their life, good or bad, but talking about it can be difficult, and for Rainbow Dash, its just like that. Her friends know nothing of it, and guilt is taking her over. Many have noticed her change in attitude, but none would dare say anything. But when her friends step in, could they help her? But more importantly, can Rainbow bring herself to tell them about it?
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FireRain, you always make the best sad fics. Absolutely loved it! Original idea(to the most extent) and great writing techniques. Only bit of criticism I can offer is there's quite a few granmatical errors here. Work on proper comma usage. Other than that it was great!
bravo That Was Amazing im a 20 year old and that made me cry my god thank you this was one of the best fics i have ever read
my throat *balls* im still crying i dont care about grammer errors if its a good story then its fine
*could have
Great story! MY FEELS!
Huh.
That's all I'll say.
Oh and it was well written.
Very well done but the ending felt really abrupt to me. Like "it's all my fault she's gone, this has haunted me my whole life, it'll never go away, I'm so tormented", then "we're your friends, we're here for you", BOOM, over! I felt there could've been more drama, more comforting and a much longer conversation after that.
5886872 You know, there could have been more drama. I'm dubbed Dramatic Dan for obvious reasons and as much as I may think of adding to the story, I don't want to ruin its success. I fear that editing and getting things out of character to the plot will get me some negatives.
Other than Dead Loyalty that I created and ME ALONE, this one is pretty good in reputation.
The feels are real
The only problem I have with this is the ending. It would have been better had her friends all comforted Rainbow Dash with the assurance it wasn't her fault.
This is..... awesome but it’s very very sad.
Something tells me this could work pretty well as a direct sequel to "Sonic Rainboom", given how Rainbow Dash only narrowly avoided losing Rarity under similar circumstances. That last-minute rescue could well have reminded her of this very tragedy. Either way, I do feel for her, having to see a foalhood friend falling to her death.