Book 2
So this is just a big author's note that hopefully won't be as missed as much. There is a sequel to this book called Broken then Healed 2. You can click here to go directly there.
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Wow. You updated this after three years?
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I get a lot of people who don't seem to find the sequel so I figured that the sequel needed better more obvious advertisement. And based on my notifications blowing up in the last few hours that it was needed. Book 2 has been out for nearly 2.5 years.
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Hmmm. Maybe try adding cover art? I hadn't even noticed the 'sequel' on the side because I didn't have anything that caught my attention (Plus, there used to be a big 'SEQUEL' thing in the description automatically when you put that in the story edit details).
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... I expect a donkey at some point in the future... Awesome story by the way.
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Yeah I guess. I'm not a very good writer myself (and to be honest I think you are better) and my story has many plotholes in it (even though its only like 6 chapters), along with many mistakes.
I don't know why, but words like 'diner' and 'dinner' bother me when they are mixed up.
And on the topic of editing; I usually just do a single read through of my chapters once I'm done, either using a text-to-speech thing to say it for me, or just reading aloud. This usually helps me fix errors with punctuation (commas in wrong places and/or need to add more commas), along with spelling errors.
It's quick too, you don't have to read it over and over again. Just do a basic edit, and then it's usually good enough.
Good story, could have been so much better if you'd had it edited though :(
Oh wow I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to seeing how there family develops in the next one.
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I still wish I could go back to BTH2 and finish it or well continue it but I just feel lost in it anymore, it also may jump the shark at a certain point. I do hope you like it though.
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Perhaps
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According to the investigators:
"It's impossible to know for sure, but my guess is that the old house has old, dilapidated wood. He must've tied the rope on a weaker support beam, probably one that had been hollow and cracking. Lucky kid indeed."
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Lol "maybe it's trying to suggest something that you yourself don't know about yourself yet."
Yeah... no. It's more likely a random ad that I got, because I don't have personalized ads turned on. It's also why I started to use Duck Duck Go as my default browser. No need for the evil overlords to know everything about me.