[This story is awful and no one should read it. I'm leaving it up to remind myself how far I've come.]
David the brony is accidentally transported to Equestria. Woohoo. But after recovering from interdimensionary blindness, he embarks on a grand adventure with Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie and learns about the seven dimensions, the truthfulness of "My Little Dashie", the Sun Princess's dark secret, and, of course, the Magic of Friendship.
Required Works:
"My Little Dashie"
"Cupcakes" (you don't actually have to read it... in fact, please don't. Just know the gist.)
Seasons 1 and 2 of MLP: FiM
Chapters (4)
Dun dun Dunnnnnnnn
Celestia was a human!
But the stained glass in the show showed pony-celestia defeat-ING discord
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Actually, she wasn't human. She was a genetically engineered alicorn from the third dimension. So she and Luna were both horned, winged ponies--one was "cartoon" and one was... uh... "thick."
If My Little Dashie was an actualy event, then why don't any of the ponies recognize a human, especaly Rainbow Dash?
If Equestria has a diffrent spectrum than Earth, then Equestrian light shouldn't be able to reflect off of David properly, David's body being made to reflect Earths light, and there for should be invisible or highly disfigured, or he would look like a cartoon character as well.
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Good observations, though it's obvious you didn't read very thoroughly.
To your comment on Chapter One, Rainbow Dash does recognize David as a human, as seen in the second chapter (don't jump to conclusions). The other ponies have had their memories altered by Celestia; just like her existence was erased from Earth other than the narrator's memories and the scrapbook, her rescue was erased from the memories of her friends while she was allowed to keep them.
To your comment on Chapter Two, I imagine that all matter in the universe is made of the same stuff and can reflect every spectrum of Light. It's David's eyes and mind that have trouble perceiving a spectrum they were not meant to see, rather than the light reflecting off his body differently.
Now this story is making some more scence, still curious as to why the other 5 ponies don't recognise a human, any way I'm guessing that Doctor Dash is infact the protagonist of MLD. Damn you Evil Celestia.
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Hehe..... shut up, I'll jump to as many conclusions as I want, like how I will conclude that this story will be awsome!
Also thanks, this has Inspired me to get back to my own MLD crossover thing. It to relies heavily on Prismatic effects and travel through muliple dimentions.
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Yay!
I'm so glad! Thanks for the good questions, it makes me want to go back and clarify better.
Keep writing yours! I'll be sure to read it. My Little Dashie is an inspiring story, and this kind of stuff is SO much fun to write... whether or not everypony enjoys reading it.
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Don't hold your breath, I'm still a shity writer so it's going to take half past forever until the first chapter is done.
So...may I ask why this one's on hiatus? It's quite good so far - the sudden cut-off is all the more jarring for the relatively fast pace and the twists that have happened so far.
Celestia's revelation in this chapter is particularly shocking, though it does seem to explain her unusually cruel behavior. In short, I hope there's more to come at some point.
867889 Aww... thank you!
This was my very first attempt at fanfiction. I wrote it on my iPhone during a very, very long drive. There is, indeed, an completed epic story arc in my head that spans several "books," each 7 chapters long (7 colors in the rainbow...). But after learning more about FiM fanfiction cliches and receiving so many "Thumbs Down" I sort of tossed it aside. I wrote it when I was a very new brony and have since grown in my understanding of the show and its amazing fandom.
But perhaps I'll finish it one day. After one of my 4 current projects is completed.
Silly, frivolous Ponky...
...so, no chance of this ever being finished?
1876433 Well... not in the next two years, anyway.