Derpy Hooves, the mailmare of Ponyville. The only mailmare of Ponyville, to be exact. She knows every letter and package that is sent, and she knows who gets a lot of mail, and who doesn't get anyhing at all.
Rarity seldom gets any mail, and now, somepony is sending her love letters. Somepony who doesn't give out their name.
Derpy follows the affair at a safe distance, hoping that one day, the anonymous pony and Rarity will find each other.
And until that day, Derpy will do her delivery route, as she does every day, sunshine or rain.
Just a quick sweet thing, written in like one hour. Now edited with the help of Psi-nova! Thanks mate!
Cover pic by RavingSpectrum
Chapters (1)
Haven't read yet but you accidentally used know instead of knows twice in your story description. a major mistake but one that got stuck in my teeth. Will post again after finished reading.
Just a few quick fixes. Nothing major but my own spelling and grammar isn't that stellar so I probably missed some stuff.
Overall I like this story. The concept of a cu5e little one off between Derpy and Rarity is sweet and I've never seen it done before. A lot of fun for so short and easy a concept. Good work!
5212454 Thanks! Glad you liked it. And thanks for the corrections, I will fix it as soon as I find a computer.
I must admit, I didn't see that coming. I know I probably should have but there you go. I was wondering how Derpy knew what the scent was so exactly, that should've been a clue.
5212760 I made those corrections on my phone. If I am unable to get inspiration to work on mine I might look this over again at home. Your more than welcome it's sweet to have something simple and fun to read.
5212961 well, my phone has some...scrolling issues. My patience ain't that good...
Please do! I would love the help!
5212454 Done and done! Thanks for the input!
Wait, that means she know everypony by name in Ponyville, and that, acording to my calculations and some random proofs given in the series, is more than four thousands of ponies.
Also, she's the mailmare, the only ones who she knows are the ponies who get a lot of mail, some mail, and poorly any mail, but there's no way, unless, again, she know everypony in the town, that she knows the ponies who doesn't get anything at all.
Also, not a sin nor a critic, but you are missing a ' in the title.
5213847 4000 is a bit to much for Ponyville, innit? I'd say 200 maximum. I don't really see your point, for example, if she passes a house every day, but never deliver any mail, then it's pretty safe for her to say that those ponies never receives mail?
And where is an "a" needed?
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Not an a, an '. In the title.
Also, I see you've never seen Littleshyfim's version of Everything wrong with