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Sonata Dusk is just thinking about everything when Dusk Shine arrives at her table. She may or may not have a teensy little crush on him.
Featuring the newest ship, DuskDusk: Sonata Dusk x Dusk Shine (R63 Twilight)
P.S. Excuse my lack of creativity on the title, the original was That DuskDusk Story with No Good Title. I'm serious.
P.P.S. The art is mine :pinkiesmile:

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

I think the title is good. I have never before heard of Dusk Shine and so it drew me too it yelling " Read me I'm short and a great story! ) I like these short stories it means I can read some before bed without getting into a series! I hope this is short and good like Bangarang!( http://www.fimfiction.net/story/214550/bangarang )
Update 1: I JUST realized this is Incomplete!

5242191 Thanks for reminding me, it is complete, but I always forget to mark it complete!

Dan

5242191

You never read Cross and Arrow? It's been one of the must-read standards since the very beginning.

Not bad. It'll be a while before I'm entirely invested on this shipping, but the story's good. :pinkiesmile:

love rule 63 and i was wondering when someone was going to do this ship

Well it was good! I liked it a lot it could maybe use some description on why the other students turn ponifyed. Other than that it was really great an i like the ship and concept!
Also a spell check. I saw some in spelled words.

New headcanon: Berry and Pinkie are dimension-hopping shippers :pinkiecrazy:

5244010 I wouldn't put anything past them!

Found a very minor thing you may want to edit.

Sonata liked to imagine it was because the remembered her amazing music before her voice had broken.

That should be "they".

I like this story, and

"I do, don't I?" Sonata sighed. "I mean, I just don't know what went wrong!

Where's Derpy?

5253590 Derpy was replaced by an eviler, cuter waifu. :pinkiecrazy:
I'm just kidding. Reference for reference's sake! :pinkiesmile:

5242678 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow is that the right story if not can you give me the link?

Nice work.

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