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A nervous stallion goes all in by asking the shy mare he likes. He only hopes the assassin's costume he gave her helps him make this Nightmare Night something spectacular.
Thank you to those who proofread, Magello, RK_Striker, and Cyberbolt.
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Just gonna say, this totally screams "Epilogue!" or at least "how about a blooper chapter where Fluttershy assassinates random ponies"
It was sweet though.
On the other hand it had that classic "dammit I'm an idiot" thing that most "shy" romances have, that thing where two people are getting cozy, and the dude is all like "I'm messing this up" even thought they totally aren't.
In other words, dammit Jumbled, ya big lug, just kiss the girl!
As for specifics, I have to note two things:
I imagined it SUPER LITERALLY. As in Discord level's of literal. A box OF chocolate.
diamondchocolatiers.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/Gift-Box-with-Mini-Peanut-Butter-Cups.jpg
Unless that's how literal you were being too, in which case, good on ya! Those must've cost a pretty bit-equivalent-of-a-penny. XD
Isn't this like, EXACTLY what tonight is for? Dressing up as what you're not, and watching would-be killers who are just average joe's?
If any night were one to pretend, it's Nightmare Night.
Anyways, lovely story, and I need to hear more about this Stallioncave of yours one day. That sounds like an interesting story in and of itself!
Anywho, happy day-after-nightmare-night and kudo's on a story well written...for a self insert.
i.ytimg.com/vi/anyK_DzJmgI/maxresdefault.jpg (just teasin' ya)