What?! No fluff?! Were's the love?! The romance?! THE DRAMA!! No, but seriously when's the romance tag going to stick? I can't wait for the next chapter hope I didn't sound harsh, I always do for some reason....
527037 Yeah, that's the worst part about being current with a story and not reading a completed one: You feel obligated to comment on the updates, but unless you're a fairly serious writer, you often just feel like you have nothing to contribute but, "Um... it's nice." I know the feeling man, I really do.
527100 FLUFF IS FOR THE WEAK! I understand where you're coming from; I do feel a bit bad for leading readers like you on with the romance tag and no romance as of yet. But, trust me, it's coming, I'm just trying to get the pace to feel right; I really enjoy well done, organic romance, so I always make a point that in any of my writing to try and make it feel as real as I can. I've still written things where characters are involved really quickly, but I do my best to explain that through circumstances and/or character personalities. For Vinyl and Octavia, I just feel like they need some time to build up. Hopefully you don't die waiting for it.
Fluff could be for the strong too! DON'T YOU EVER DENY THAT!! Yeah I understand don't want to rush things right? But how many chapters until something big happens (like something that tells us were this story is leading to, i.e. Vinyl dies, Mix quits on Vinyl, I dunno) It's progressing is awfully slow... But then again you probably need more chapters, a slow incline to what ever climax your planning right? Until then I'll survive, living off of Minecraft and weekly episodes of MLP.
569486 Ah, well I'm glad you did! I reread my own work a lot, but because I'm not super serious about this, count this more as practice/fun than anything else, and am mostly confident in my ability to write something with at least 90% (ish) accurate grammar/spelling, I haven't gotten a pre-reader (wow that sentence was really drawn out, but I'm far too lazy to try and fix it). 570868 When you say "the middle section" I'm not really sure where you mean; if you could give me a more specific area I'd be happy to discuss this specific point (because, even if I don't take this that seriously, I am always interested in ways to improve my writing).
Much thanks for your comments, and hopefully your reply that will help improve this work.
wooooooo updates!
bah I never have anything interesting to say other than "good work" yadda yadda so I'll say good work and keep it up
What?! No fluff?!
Were's the love?! The romance?! THE DRAMA!!
No, but seriously when's the romance tag going to stick?
I can't wait for the next chapter hope I didn't sound harsh, I always do for some reason....
527037
Yeah, that's the worst part about being current with a story and not reading a completed one: You feel obligated to comment on the updates, but unless you're a fairly serious writer, you often just feel like you have nothing to contribute but, "Um... it's nice." I know the feeling man, I really do.
527100
FLUFF IS FOR THE WEAK!
I understand where you're coming from; I do feel a bit bad for leading readers like you on with the romance tag and no romance as of yet. But, trust me, it's coming, I'm just trying to get the pace to feel right; I really enjoy well done, organic romance, so I always make a point that in any of my writing to try and make it feel as real as I can. I've still written things where characters are involved really quickly, but I do my best to explain that through circumstances and/or character personalities.
For Vinyl and Octavia, I just feel like they need some time to build up. Hopefully you don't die waiting for it.
Just look at his pic I don't think he likes waiting >.< jk jk
This is a great story so far i can wait to see what happens next.
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Fluff could be for the strong too! DON'T YOU EVER DENY THAT!!
Yeah I understand don't want to rush things right? But how many chapters until something big happens (like something that tells us were this story is leading to, i.e. Vinyl dies, Mix quits on Vinyl, I dunno) It's progressing is awfully slow... But then again you probably need more chapters, a slow incline to what ever climax your planning right? Until then I'll survive, living off of Minecraft and weekly episodes of MLP.
569486 Ah, well I'm glad you did! I reread my own work a lot, but because I'm not super serious about this, count this more as practice/fun than anything else, and am mostly confident in my ability to write something with at least 90% (ish) accurate grammar/spelling, I haven't gotten a pre-reader (wow that sentence was really drawn out, but I'm far too lazy to try and fix it).
570868 When you say "the middle section" I'm not really sure where you mean; if you could give me a more specific area I'd be happy to discuss this specific point (because, even if I don't take this that seriously, I am always interested in ways to improve my writing).
Much thanks for your comments, and hopefully your reply that will help improve this work.