With her career and life feeling like a dead end, can Vinyl start over with Octavia's help?
(Joke) Alt. Title: The Untitled RecordVinyl's life sucks and it gets featured. How does that work?
Your re-write is great! Keep it up, I'll stick around for the rest as long as you continue to make the next chapters just as good.
HEY glad to see you back at the reins, so to speak
just a few minor bumps here and there, nothing painful:
“you play the violin quiet well.”
Quite*
“You told me yesterday that you did not me to feel worse about my lack luster performance, remember?”
could use a bit of help on grammar, the sentence's intent isn't very clear...perhaps "Did not wantme to feel worse"?
meaning that her goal for the day had be realized and she could go home happy
been* realized
that's all i caught , and I'm glad to hear you're well settled nowadays
(Joke) Alt. Title: The Untitled Record
Vinyl's life sucks and it gets featured. How does that work?
Your re-write is great! Keep it up, I'll stick around for the rest as long as you continue to make the next chapters just as good.
HEY glad to see you back at the reins, so to speak
just a few minor bumps here and there, nothing painful:
Quite*
could use a bit of help on grammar, the sentence's intent isn't very clear...perhaps "Did not want
me to feel worse"?
been* realized
that's all i caught , and I'm glad to hear you're well settled nowadays