Awesome, some grammar mistakes but no many. Just one or two. I hope you update often, I'm all sucked up playing minecraft instead of reading a few good fics like these.
501172 I've got very little going on in my life right now, so, lucky for you, I'll probably be updating this fairly frequently. Not that it's necessary, but if you're going to mention that you believe I've made some grammatical mistake, I would appreciate if you could point them out to me. I know sometimes you realize that something you read is off, but you're not in editing-mode so you just skip by it and you don't really care enough to going searching back for it, and that's fair. That aside, thank you for you interest in the story.
503745 Not only am I capturing the attention of long time TaviScratch fans, but I'm making new believers? Excellent! All according to plan.
hmmm, alright I’m gonna follow this. It's interesting enough. The only complain i have is that i don't see a single good thing about Vinyl so far. She is the bad kind of party mare, alcoholic, extremely judgmental, disrespectful and constantly lets her only friend hanging. Not to mention that the only time it looked like she doesn't try to get fired was when she stopped herself from outright suggesting to get fired. seriously give us something to think that she deserves even some of the kindness she gets from Octy.
513101 Haha, alright, no biggy. I've been considering getting a prereader, but, honestly, I don't really care that much and just want to get the chapters up when I feel like it. Also, I reread the damn things at least 3 times. :P
513283 That's completely fair criticism, and it also happens to be completely on purpose. I wanted to set up what these characters look/seem like on the outside much more before really jumping into them. I can understand why you'd be frustrated, but I'll I can say is: Yup, that's Vinyl; part of the plan is to have you wonder why in Equestria put up with her - it makes you really curious to find out what's really behind all of her show. At least, that's how see it. It may not come across as planned, but I've never written a character like Vinyl before, and I wanted to try some brash and bold this time around.
Anyways, thank you kindly for the comment and being vocal about your concerns.
“I mean...” She let out a long sigh as she dried off her hooves. “Well, never mind that. Anyways, you shouldn’t be drinking on an empty stomach; did you at least think to drink some water before you downed that?”
“Duh, I’m not knew to drinking.”
Your ears; new to drinking. Love the story so far, just some minor grammar and spelling things that are kind of jarring.
Awesome, some grammar mistakes but no many. Just one or two.
I hope you update often, I'm all sucked up playing minecraft instead of reading a few good fics like these.
Keep it up! You're making me start to like Octy and Vinyl!
I like this so far... Can't wait to see where you go with this :)
My favorite ship. And one of my new favorite stories! Keep up the awesome work!
501172
I've got very little going on in my life right now, so, lucky for you, I'll probably be updating this fairly frequently.
Not that it's necessary, but if you're going to mention that you believe I've made some grammatical mistake, I would appreciate if you could point them out to me. I know sometimes you realize that something you read is off, but you're not in editing-mode so you just skip by it and you don't really care enough to going searching back for it, and that's fair. That aside, thank you for you interest in the story.
503745
Not only am I capturing the attention of long time TaviScratch fans, but I'm making new believers? Excellent! All according to plan.
505259
Glad to hear it, and neither can I!
505694
TaviScratch for life, my friend! Thanks for the kind words.
505999
Dude! I plan to!
I'm very happy to hear that my story has got you so enthralled already, and I hope I continue to please.
So far this story is pretty interesting, so I cant wait to see more. Oh and Octyscratch is win
Hmm very nicely done, I love Vinyl and Octavia ships and this is looking to be another good one.
Keep up the good work bro.
506054
Well let me see there was a grammar mistake.. Can't find it. Well I'm no proofreader but if I see it I'll try to tell you..
hmmm, alright I’m gonna follow this. It's interesting enough.
The only complain i have is that i don't see a single good thing about Vinyl so far.
She is the bad kind of party mare, alcoholic, extremely judgmental, disrespectful and constantly lets her only friend hanging. Not to mention that the only time it looked like she doesn't try to get fired was when she stopped herself from outright suggesting to get fired.
seriously give us something to think that she deserves even some of the kindness she gets from Octy.
507581
Thank you for the kind following of my story. And yes, yes it is.
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And I hope it continues to be a good one!
513101
Haha, alright, no biggy. I've been considering getting a prereader, but, honestly, I don't really care that much and just want to get the chapters up when I feel like it. Also, I reread the damn things at least 3 times. :P
513283
That's completely fair criticism, and it also happens to be completely on purpose. I wanted to set up what these characters look/seem like on the outside much more before really jumping into them. I can understand why you'd be frustrated, but I'll I can say is: Yup, that's Vinyl; part of the plan is to have you wonder why in Equestria put up with her - it makes you really curious to find out what's really behind all of her show.
At least, that's how see it. It may not come across as planned, but I've never written a character like Vinyl before, and I wanted to try some brash and bold this time around.
Anyways, thank you kindly for the comment and being vocal about your concerns.
this is an awesome story so far. The way you have written it turns my brain into confused mush and I love it!
“Yeah – are you ears not working or somethin’?”
“I mean...” She let out a long sigh as she dried off her hooves. “Well, never mind that. Anyways, you shouldn’t be drinking on an empty stomach; did you at least think to drink some water before you downed that?”
“Duh, I’m not knew to drinking.”
Your ears; new to drinking.
Love the story so far, just some minor grammar and spelling things that are kind of jarring.