Gavin, a depressed teen who had lost his parents tragically at an early age, must cope with being sent to Equestria at almost random. But at the same time, an ancient evil lurks around every corner... Gavin must help his friends.. No matter the cost.
This will be updated weekly. Also, I'm told you people don't like me saying this, but I'm going to say it nicer. This also about my newer OC.
Please, I beg you, don't add this to any groups without telling me. I really don't want this to end up somewhere it's only going to get downvotes.
Chapters (2)
This is a very bad idea........
I pray that the people of this site have mercy upon you...
Reporting this to the mods because it's not properly marked as a sequel to An Alicorn's Struggle.
Oh God please no...
NOT BADLY WRITTEN FIMFICTION! PLEASE ANYTHING BUT THAT!
Please, I beg you, don't add this to any groups without telling me. I really don't want this to end up somewhere it's only going to get downvotes.
This self gratifying, grammar impaired, alicorn OCed, badly written, unintentionally hilarious, cliche ridden, tedious mess would get downvotes in a kindergarten. Plan 9 from Equestria here we come... With or without your consent.
P.S Of course, it's hard to teach flies about magic & books... THEY'RE FLIES!!!!
P.P.S THANK YOU FOR SULLYING ONE OF MY FAVOURITE SONGS FROM ONE OF MY FAVOURITE DISNEY FILMS WITH YOUR TITLE. ROBIN WILLIAMS JUST DIED RECENTLY... HAVE SOME RESPECT.
If this is a trollfic, then it ain't funny, and if it isn't, then it's crap
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I prayed for mercy on you, dear Author.
But alas, sometimes God says no.
PS: People will add stories to the groups that they think they belong in, you can't really stop them.
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This was hilarious until I realised who the author was, then it became kinda meh.
Troll harder next time, Based Windlife.
AHAHAHAHA.
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If I knew how to add things to groups, This would in in Plan 9. And Plan 9: 2.
To be sung to the tune of you-know-what
I CAN SHOW YOU A FIC
SHITTY, SHAMEFUL, SHAMBOLIC
TELL ME, AUTHOR
CAN YOU HONESTLY
SAY YOU EVEN TRIED?
YOU HAVE OPENED MY BOWELS
MADE ME VOMIT EVERYWHERE
OVER SIDEWALKS AND UNDER
ON MY BRAND NEW CARPET... *SIGH*
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
A NEW, HORRIFIC PILE OF POO
WHY DIDN'T THE MODS TELL YOU "NO"
OR WHERE TO GO
PLEASE TELL ME, AM I DREAMING...
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
A STORY I WISH I'D NEVER KNEW
AND NOW WAY FROM WAY UP HERE
IT'S CRYSTAL CLEAR
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
NEEDS TO BE FLUSHED DOWN THE LOO..
(NOW I'M READING A WHOLE NEW WORLD)
UNBELIEVABLE SPELLING (unbelievably bad, that is)
INDESCRIBABLY BORING
SNORING, GRUMBLING, I'M REELING
FROM THIS ENDLESS CRAP. PLEASE DIE.
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
(PLEASE CAN I CLOSE MY EYES)
A THOUSAND WORDS OF TRASH
(HOLD YOUR BREATH IT GETS WORSE)
I'M SHOOTING DOWN TO THE BAR
20 BEERS SO FAR
I STILL CAN'T FORGET
THE HORRORS I'VE SEEN
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
(EVERY PARAGRAPH A NIGHTMARE)
NEW LOWS IN WRITING
(HOLD YOUR BREATH IT GETS EVEN WORSE)
PLEASE TAKE IT ANYWHERE
I DON'T REALLY CARE
JUST DON'T SHARE A WHOLE NEW WORLD WITH ME
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
A WHOLE NEW WORLD
BURNING IN PURGATORY
THAT'S WHERE IT'LL BE
WHERE IT'LL BE
OUT OF MY FACE
TO 'THAT OTHER' PLACE
PLEASE DO IT FOR... MMEEE...
My apologies to Alan Menken (rest his soul) and Sir Tim Rice, but some things must be done...
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HOW DO YOU KNOW
HE COULD BE SERI--
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^ good song
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^ funny song
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^ funny, yet poorly received stories that indicate ironically bad author
HE'S SERIOUS GUARDIAN TAKE HIM SERIOUSLY
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5193701 You, my friend, should be a Comedian!
I've never been sitting in my house, all alone, laughing at the top of my lungs!
Well done, lad, well done.
Beautiful fanfic, well planned characters, superb plot. I recommend this to everyone on fimfiction, this story is deep and engaging with perfect worldbuilding.
You deserve a thumbs up my friend.
Who liked this?
(Other then the Author)
toplel
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If this isn't about Batman, I'm out.
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I do not think it should like this. My Oc is going to get better so please stop acting like a child.
5193701 I find this rude, can you please remove it?
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I think people with taste will like mmy work. It's better then most of th stuff around here.
LOOK IF YOU ASSHOLES DONT STOP THIS IM GOING TO LEAVE THE SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The chapter name was cool!
Apart from that... It really wasn't that good. The character was bland and generic, your narrative isn't that interesting, and 1000-2000 words isn't a chapter, it's the first few pages. Your character also looks lame. Red and black does not go together, and never will.
Finally, if you have to use "Tragically" in a story's description, that's not a good sign. Show, don't tell.
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Can you people just give me a fucking brake? I don't under stand how I supposed to tell my story if all of you keep downvoting it!
ITS GOING TO GET BETTEER!
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Didyou downvote my post? Wow, r00d.
Anyway, it's spelled break.
Finally... It gets better? How so? Epic fight scenes? Deep character studies? Character development? Complex Xantos Roulettes?
Also, your character looks like a badly ponified Zoroark from Pokémon. Zoroark is kinda lame, there are better Pokémon out there.
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Im sick of people likje you.
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It get's better, fool.
I can't tell you how without soiling it for everyone WHO WANTS TO READ IT!
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I'm going to politely ask you to not call me a fool.
And if it's really that much of an "It gets better" story? Post somewhere a spoilertagged "The next twenty episode synopses" thing. That's what I'm tempted to do, considering how my fic was added into a "Did not read, and is not worth following" group within a day of being posted. I'm pretty sure I didn't ask for him to say he didn't read it, and I'm not sure why anyone would. But at least the people here have the common human decency to tell you why we think your story could use some improvement. That makes these people better than the one who added my story to that group. The guy who composed a Whole New World parody song, that was cool. You rock, song parody guy.
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Wait, you said soiled instead of spoiled. Sorry, but I need to make this joke:
How can you soil it, when it's already crap?!
*Ba dum tss*
But in all seriousness, I hope you improve as a writer, and come back with something gloriously epic.
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I dont think I need to improve if I'm already good enuf.
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He's going to fight the evil attacking Equestria! How is that not cool and fun to read? I don't get why people downvote EVERYTHING I DO!
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Wow, everything you just said was wrong! HAHAHA!
Try thinking about something better then that! when you try to insult someone! Your very bad at this aren't you?
Don't you get tired of being such an obvious troll? You need to go stealth if you want to catch a lot of fish.
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. But if you liked the story please give it a upvote and fav, thank you very much! 
I don't get why everyone says that about me
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I don't get it...